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Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Autumn aroma"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
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Comment from Terry Broxson
I admit I wonder why anyone would have a contest about autumn in the spring. But that issue aside, you have written a wonderful little poem about one of the best things about autumn. I can smell it in Texas. And the good thing is that it is only available in autumn, kind of like eggnog and December. Well done. Terry.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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I admit I wonder why anyone would have a contest about autumn in the spring. But that issue aside, you have written a wonderful little poem about one of the best things about autumn. I can smell it in Texas. And the good thing is that it is only available in autumn, kind of like eggnog and December. Well done. Terry.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Terry!
Comment from Gina Schneller
Hello there! What a great entry for the contest! So nicely written and 100% true! Perfect picture at well! ~ Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us all! ~ Best of luck in your writing journey! :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Hello there! What a great entry for the contest! So nicely written and 100% true! Perfect picture at well! ~ Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us all! ~ Best of luck in your writing journey! :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Cherish Adams
This is perfectly Autumn. What a great entry for the contest. The syllable count is correct and it flows well. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Cherish
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This is perfectly Autumn. What a great entry for the contest. The syllable count is correct and it flows well. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Cherish
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Jessica, Excellent 5/7/5 poem for the ode to Autumn contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Hello, Jessica, Excellent 5/7/5 poem for the ode to Autumn contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Gypsy!!
Comment from Boogienights
Tis the season for pumpkins indeed. I love autumn, it's actually my favorite time of year. The temperature is lovely and so are the scents. A very nice contest entry, best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Tis the season for pumpkins indeed. I love autumn, it's actually my favorite time of year. The temperature is lovely and so are the scents. A very nice contest entry, best of luck. :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!:)
Comment from Mary Shifman
You are so right!. There is nothing like pumpkin spice to make me think of autumn--Halloween, Thanksgiving, etc. Pumpkin pie is one of my very favorites. Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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You are so right!. There is nothing like pumpkin spice to make me think of autumn--Halloween, Thanksgiving, etc. Pumpkin pie is one of my very favorites. Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Mary!!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A well written poem with effective autumn imagery.
-You do a good job describing the scents of autumn
with pumpkin spice, perhaps coming from a pie!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A well written poem with effective autumn imagery.
-You do a good job describing the scents of autumn
with pumpkin spice, perhaps coming from a pie!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Pam! I appreciate that!
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You are welcome!
Comment from mermaids
Love the smell of pumpkin spice. Your words appeal to the senses and the feel of Autumn comes through clearly in your words. Excellent ode to Autumn that makes the reader feel good.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Love the smell of pumpkin spice. Your words appeal to the senses and the feel of Autumn comes through clearly in your words. Excellent ode to Autumn that makes the reader feel good.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from TPAC
I do feel your statement, reminding me of the morning glories in the house back field, thinking of that moment reliving not just the various aromas but the array of colors with this field. I thank you for that memory. I found this a delightful read.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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I do feel your statement, reminding me of the morning glories in the house back field, thinking of that moment reliving not just the various aromas but the array of colors with this field. I thank you for that memory. I found this a delightful read.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you ak much!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your ode to autumn works for me, celebrating what scents we all seem to associate with autumn. Even the colors of pumpkin spice mirror the colors to be seen outside our windows.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Your ode to autumn works for me, celebrating what scents we all seem to associate with autumn. Even the colors of pumpkin spice mirror the colors to be seen outside our windows.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you! I appreciate your review!