Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

This is a mix of reality and pure fantasy, although that is not my usual cup of tea. I don't like tea, by the way. But you certainly managed to paint a great picture. And now the hunt is on. Sally has entered the story. Lol. Ulla Xxx

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind stars. It is greatly appreciated. I?m glad you enjoyed the prelude of what?s to come. Sending you my best, and love and blessings always.
Sal xoxo?s

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Fitzgerald Elling was furious that his assistant was gone, he knew too much incriminations evidences. Vying with the demons for Aspen grove was the Angel patience. but help is on its way in the form of Faithful, I like this one, as there's more to it than just humans, the angelic presence is aiding the goodies, well done, Sally, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your kind review of my book chapter. I?m glad you enjoyed the angel demon conflict too. It?s going to heat up in the next few chapters. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs

reply by royowen on 16-Mar-2023

Well done

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

This chapter is introducing the blind girl, it is fascinating to think that you play a part in this story. Such a clever detective. There is no place better than to solve a crooked individual.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your kind of you and compliments. I?m so glad you enjoyed it all. Sending along my very best to you and yours, Sally. XOs

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Hi,
I love both the illustration and the quote and envy your ability to write a long text. I find novels tough to write.
I also have to say that you master both first and third person.
Thanks for sharing. Hugs.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Dear Heather, thank you so much for the lovely view of my book chapter and your kind compliments. This is my seventh book on fan story and my newest detective. Tell me Thompson. I will be stopping by is the blind girl from my other books to help him out. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally.xo

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Fee's day of reckoning has finally come. I hope Simon has a witness that he won't be implicated as he seems to have been forced to do bad things. Now that Sally and King are there all the evil will soon be cleared up.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

Dear Carol, thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments. Yes, the Blind Girl and King are coming by to lend a hand. Sending you my very best.
Sal XOs

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I wish I had a six. Good one Detective Sally Law. Now we get down to business. Semmes as if prayerfully you have God on your side so look out demons the Lord is coming. Well, done, Billionaire, Sal,

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023

What a treat to see you here today. Thank you so much for this review and the wonderful stars. It is both needed and appreciated. A virtual six means so much too. Especially from someone as nice as you. Blessings to you, dear Ben. Sally :))

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

So Sally has arrived to help that is a good thing. I am sure she'll solve the problem.

I put my arm around Willa to fend of the chill. (fend OFF the chill?)

The despicable man smiled a fake smile. (The despicable man faked a smile. Maybe??)

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023

Thank you, Barbara. I have repaired them both. Flashed a fake smile is what I meant to say. Beware those last minute changes. LOL!
Sending you my very best.
Sal XOs