In my Autumn Years
Reflecting on my Legacy40 total reviews
Comment from Theodore McDowell
I love the photographs with this one. I also loved the contemplation of your legacy and how you focus on service to others as your true legacy as well as your poetry. Hope all is well.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I love the photographs with this one. I also loved the contemplation of your legacy and how you focus on service to others as your true legacy as well as your poetry. Hope all is well.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Theo, for the review. Typically, our children are a big part of our legacy, but that will not be in my case.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Although this is not a sonnet it reminds me of one Shakespeare wrote as he reflects on how he will be remembered when he was gone. You are leaving behind a fine legacy Sandra, much enjoyed, fine rhymes and content, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Although this is not a sonnet it reminds me of one Shakespeare wrote as he reflects on how he will be remembered when he was gone. You are leaving behind a fine legacy Sandra, much enjoyed, fine rhymes and content, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Dolly, thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Dr. Von
I like the reflective tone of this poem. Your writing causes the reader to travel the memory road with you. Your work is inspirational. This piece answers the contest prompt very well. I enjoyed your photographs as well as your poem. Thank you for sharing your gift. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I like the reflective tone of this poem. Your writing causes the reader to travel the memory road with you. Your work is inspirational. This piece answers the contest prompt very well. I enjoyed your photographs as well as your poem. Thank you for sharing your gift. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thanks Dr. Von, your comments and review are appreciated.
Comment from judiverse
What a great montage of pictures. As they show, you have a legacy to be proud of. You have many achievements to look back on--not only your teaching but your work as a park ranger and soldier. It's great that you keep in touch with your students. Excellent work with your rhyme, and best of luck in the contest. This will surely be in the winners' circle. judi
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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What a great montage of pictures. As they show, you have a legacy to be proud of. You have many achievements to look back on--not only your teaching but your work as a park ranger and soldier. It's great that you keep in touch with your students. Excellent work with your rhyme, and best of luck in the contest. This will surely be in the winners' circle. judi
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thanks Judi, for your supportive comments and review.
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You're welcome. I like your picture. judi
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Thank you!
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, In Autumn Years, celebrates all that you have included here in your notes.
Your female students remember that You're Every Woman
as they dance to life's music, knowing the many contributions of females to the American culture.
Dining at the Poets' Cafe, students also feed other minds.
Chat and laughter went a long way to enticing young minds to engage.
A life done well.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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This poem, In Autumn Years, celebrates all that you have included here in your notes.
Your female students remember that You're Every Woman
as they dance to life's music, knowing the many contributions of females to the American culture.
Dining at the Poets' Cafe, students also feed other minds.
Chat and laughter went a long way to enticing young minds to engage.
A life done well.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Mr. Bill. Your statements are appreciated.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Sandra, a 6 star poem for
sure, but I ran out this past
Thursday. I'd say you've been
having a wondrous and
forfilling life. I hope your
Veterans Day was grand.
A wondrous autumnal weekend to you. Blessings ~
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Hi Sandra, a 6 star poem for
sure, but I ran out this past
Thursday. I'd say you've been
having a wondrous and
forfilling life. I hope your
Veterans Day was grand.
A wondrous autumnal weekend to you. Blessings ~
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Regina for your comments and review.
Comment from Sankey
Hi, new friend. This was a great tribute to all you have done. Praying it will be a blessing to all who read. Nice meeting you. Still looking for that suitable image, hehe.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Hi, new friend. This was a great tribute to all you have done. Praying it will be a blessing to all who read. Nice meeting you. Still looking for that suitable image, hehe.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you SanKey for your friendly review. Why not type in your search engine for the word Free image of prepackaged/ rerun/ regift/ carbon copy. If you find any of those words in large size print use it as a visual.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Sandra,
This is a well done abab poem that shows you had a good life and that a lot of people will remember you.
The ideas in this poem are what we all think about as we age and get nearer to the end of life.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Hi Sandra,
This is a well done abab poem that shows you had a good life and that a lot of people will remember you.
The ideas in this poem are what we all think about as we age and get nearer to the end of life.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Joa, thank you so much for your review. Yes, we are closer to the end than the beginning.
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Don't mention it, Sandra.
Joan
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
Beautifully written. It warms my heart to think of your legacy of teaching and encouraging so many young minds. You will not be forgotten. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Beautifully written. It warms my heart to think of your legacy of teaching and encouraging so many young minds. You will not be forgotten. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your sweet review. I loved teaching.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the photos and descriptions, Sandra.
-A very nice presentation and well written poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse and question.
-The pride you took in teaching
young people comes through very well.
-I was a high school English teacher,
and felt the same way about reaching students
and providing them with challenges.
-This is my favorite line:
"because needed is writing that creates a thinking cry."
-A very good closing verse, as well.
-I enjoyed reading your poem
and like your profile picture, too.
-Have a great day and rest of your weekend.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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-Thanks for sharing the photos and descriptions, Sandra.
-A very nice presentation and well written poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse and question.
-The pride you took in teaching
young people comes through very well.
-I was a high school English teacher,
and felt the same way about reaching students
and providing them with challenges.
-This is my favorite line:
"because needed is writing that creates a thinking cry."
-A very good closing verse, as well.
-I enjoyed reading your poem
and like your profile picture, too.
-Have a great day and rest of your weekend.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Pam,
Thank you for your generous comments and the review. Have a blessed weekend!
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You are very welcome, Sandra, and you do the same.
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Thanks!
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You're welcome😊