Happy Father's Day God
To my Awesome Heavenly Father30 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This beautiful tribute to our Father on Father's Day made my day! Each thing you mentioned is so true, and I share every thought of honor that you wrote about Him.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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This beautiful tribute to our Father on Father's Day made my day! Each thing you mentioned is so true, and I share every thought of honor that you wrote about Him.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Verna. Honoring our Father everyday like Father's Day seems like we pay more attention to gratitude and His love for us..
I humbly thank you for this beautiful review, words and your most generous six stars. You have no idea what that means to me, and I appreciate so very much my dear friend!
Comment from Susan Newell
Debi,
This is such a wonderful message. We should consider every day THE Father's Day. He has blessed us so much and we so often forget to say thank you.
Sue
But you my Heavenly Father, we talk every time I pray -- This line seems to have two subjects. Perhaps a rewording without the "you" before "Heavenly Father" would fix it. Substitute an adjective for "you my?"
I Love You, God, so I believe, each day is Fathers Day -- missing apostrophe in Father's
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Debi,
This is such a wonderful message. We should consider every day THE Father's Day. He has blessed us so much and we so often forget to say thank you.
Sue
But you my Heavenly Father, we talk every time I pray -- This line seems to have two subjects. Perhaps a rewording without the "you" before "Heavenly Father" would fix it. Substitute an adjective for "you my?"
I Love You, God, so I believe, each day is Fathers Day -- missing apostrophe in Father's
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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First l thank you for the awesome feedback. Fixed! I used Gracious for an adjective. Also thanks for what auto correct usually picks up.
And thank you Susan for the lovely review and the generous six stars my friend. I can't tell you how much that means. You are so very sweet and I thank you again for this whole wonderful review my dear friend!
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You are very welcome, Debi.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful poem of praise and thanks to God, and it is so lovely that you father changed and became a man of faith who would teach you about your heavenly Father. Beautifully written, and a nice one for those of us whose earthly fathers weren't role models.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Beautiful poem of praise and thanks to God, and it is so lovely that you father changed and became a man of faith who would teach you about your heavenly Father. Beautifully written, and a nice one for those of us whose earthly fathers weren't role models.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Wendy, thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. As always you are so kind and I appreciate what you said about this poem, that I have been wanting to write for quite a while, but needed the inspiration that was perfect for Father's Day. Thank you again my friend!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, you have penned a beautiful Father's Day tribute to our heavenly Father who is responsible for all things. Your poem reads and flows well and has silky rhyming within. I especially liked:
Nothing is more Perfect than the Love you have for us
(Debi, this is so very true.)
Also of note:
Because of him I was so small, I almost didn't live.
(It is amazing how you can take something like the above
and somehow make it sound and flow so beautifully.)
And:
Because I Love You Father, it's how I view this day!
(So loving and heartfelt, just like you.)
A poem of faith, gratitude, and thanks. Well done. This poem made me smile. Margaret ~ LB ~ SOTU
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Hi Debi, you have penned a beautiful Father's Day tribute to our heavenly Father who is responsible for all things. Your poem reads and flows well and has silky rhyming within. I especially liked:
Nothing is more Perfect than the Love you have for us
(Debi, this is so very true.)
Also of note:
Because of him I was so small, I almost didn't live.
(It is amazing how you can take something like the above
and somehow make it sound and flow so beautifully.)
And:
Because I Love You Father, it's how I view this day!
(So loving and heartfelt, just like you.)
A poem of faith, gratitude, and thanks. Well done. This poem made me smile. Margaret ~ LB ~ SOTU
Comment Written 19-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Oh Margaret, I just love you! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your awesomely wonderful words. I had a review that called it cheesy and I didn't think of it that way, but I did change a few things. So bless your heart and I thank you for those stars that seem to say, yes God you really are worth the tribute! And you are so very special! Thank you my friend!
SOTU~ Debi
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Debi, your poem was unique and a refreshing way to look at Father's Day. Also, for all the people who have struggled and felt that they had/have no Father figure, your poem tells them differently. For anyone who doesn't have a Dad to give tribute to on this day for whatever reason, they can see that they most certainly have a Father, the most important one. They can bow their head or lift up their head in thanks. Well done. Xo. Margaret
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Thank you my friend
Comment from karenina
Wow. You know? Through all these years I have never thought to do as you have done!
Write a Father's Day poem to God the Father!
My heart filled with joy as I read this...
You, my friend, are filled with "Amazing Grace!"
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Wow. You know? Through all these years I have never thought to do as you have done!
Write a Father's Day poem to God the Father!
My heart filled with joy as I read this...
You, my friend, are filled with "Amazing Grace!"
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much my Sweet Katerina! That is a name from the Shakespeare era, so I had to try it on you for size, but I love my Karenina better. You are so darn sweet, and always give me just what I need, right when I need it. Thank you my lovely friend for the lovely review and your most kind words! Thank you Sweetie!
Comment from SimianSavant
Ok, I did not see who wrote this so please understand this isn't personal. Making a Father's Day write about God is super cheesy and cringeworthy. I guess I should add "in my opinion", but I'm right. Now that we're past that:
Some of your rhymes feel a bit forced. This one here does not work:
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Nothing is more Perfect than the Love you have for us
I no longer want the life I led, or be who I once was
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Yeah they don't rhyme. Moving on:
That's when he learned to trust in You, and for us he learned to give <= your meter was good up to this point. From here on out, it is off the rails. Shouldn't be too hard to fix it.
Thank you for the read, and hope this was helpful to you,
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Ok, I did not see who wrote this so please understand this isn't personal. Making a Father's Day write about God is super cheesy and cringeworthy. I guess I should add "in my opinion", but I'm right. Now that we're past that:
Some of your rhymes feel a bit forced. This one here does not work:
=>
Nothing is more Perfect than the Love you have for us
I no longer want the life I led, or be who I once was
<=
Yeah they don't rhyme. Moving on:
That's when he learned to trust in You, and for us he learned to give <= your meter was good up to this point. From here on out, it is off the rails. Shouldn't be too hard to fix it.
Thank you for the read, and hope this was helpful to you,
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Cheesy? I'm afraid there's so much you don't understand my friend. However, I agreed w a few things and did go back to fix things as I did rush a little posting this. I do appreciate your feedback and your opinion. Please look again, not to change your rating, but hopefully it reads better, as I do take pride in my work. Thank you my friend, very much!
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Cheesy? I'm afraid there's so much you don't understand my friend. However, I agreed w a few things and did go back to fix things as I did rush a little posting this. I do appreciate your feedback and your opinion. Please look again, not to change your rating, but hopefully it reads better, as I do take pride in my work. Thank you my friend, very much!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very heartfelt expression of your strong faith in Your Heavenly Father and your love for your earthly father who guided you to the Father. A strong spiritual poem.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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A very heartfelt expression of your strong faith in Your Heavenly Father and your love for your earthly father who guided you to the Father. A strong spiritual poem.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you so very much! Since so many of us no longer have the one here on Earth, it felt only right to praise the One who we pray to everyday.
Thank you so much for your very kind review and comments my friend!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a intriguing look at Father's Day. Your faith is so strong that I can see the connection. This is beautifully presented and written. The font choice mirrors the tenderness that you feel and have expressed.
The rhymes seem carefully chosen and flow without force. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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This is a intriguing look at Father's Day. Your faith is so strong that I can see the connection. This is beautifully presented and written. The font choice mirrors the tenderness that you feel and have expressed.
The rhymes seem carefully chosen and flow without force. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thanks KL, it was one of those things that I felt compelled to do but needed to change it a bit, as I kinda rushed it. I think it looks better now. But something I wanted to do because He is the only Father so many of us have to talk to anymore! It did give me peace! Thanks my lovely friend for your kind review and words!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet tribute for Father's day and I enjoyed the sentiments here Debi. An unselfish and endearing write and I loved your faithful words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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This is a sweet tribute for Father's day and I enjoyed the sentiments here Debi. An unselfish and endearing write and I loved your faithful words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Oh thank you so much Dolly. You are so kind, and l truly appreciate your lovely review and words. Thank you so much my friend!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a unique and wonderful idea. Wish THE father a happy Father's Day. Without him we would certainly not even be here. He is everyone's father.
Wonderful tribute Debi.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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What a unique and wonderful idea. Wish THE father a happy Father's Day. Without him we would certainly not even be here. He is everyone's father.
Wonderful tribute Debi.
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022
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Thank you Gary, as I always love hearing from you! I got one review where someone called it cheesy, but I should have seen that coming as I know that this guy isn't a Christian, yet he had a few good points so I went in to change it. I do think it sounds better now. I get excited and sometimes don't let it simmer long enough where Ingo back and change before posting it. Thank you my awesome friend for your always kind words! I truly appreciate it my friend!
