Soft whispers
haiku34 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
That picture perfectly illustrates the moon leaning in to whisper to the breeze blowing through those leafless trees. Your poem is bewitching! Lots of imagery.
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That picture perfectly illustrates the moon leaning in to whisper to the breeze blowing through those leafless trees. Your poem is bewitching! Lots of imagery.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Pam... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very original Haiku. Nice photo-shop on the picture.
Why is it that the full of moon
Brings werewolves out and lovers swoon?
Melissa, it can often be
What makes us poets write poetry.
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Very original Haiku. Nice photo-shop on the picture.
Why is it that the full of moon
Brings werewolves out and lovers swoon?
Melissa, it can often be
What makes us poets write poetry.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Paul... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!! I love your verse in your response!! Clever.
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork, Melissa.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery.
-I like the idea of the moon whispering sonnets.
-A good satori, line, too.
-You also create a peaceful mood.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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-Great artwork, Melissa.
-A well written haiku with effective
nature and seasonal imagery.
-I like the idea of the moon whispering sonnets.
-A good satori, line, too.
-You also create a peaceful mood.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Pam... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa.
Comment from Pantygynt
this haiku demonstrates a fine word choice with an exquisite satori line to round it off. So appropriate as we approach a full moon, either tonight or tomorrow.
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this haiku demonstrates a fine word choice with an exquisite satori line to round it off. So appropriate as we approach a full moon, either tonight or tomorrow.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello dear Jim... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Wendy G
Not in a contest?! This is very beautiful. Your composition is excellent and you've chosen an extraordinary image to accompany your words. Well done.
Wendy
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Not in a contest?! This is very beautiful. Your composition is excellent and you've chosen an extraordinary image to accompany your words. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Wendy... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful Haiku, the image of whispering sonnets is quite moving, and yes with the moon and the image your words provide it is bewitching, very well written and presented****kahpot
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What a beautiful Haiku, the image of whispering sonnets is quite moving, and yes with the moon and the image your words provide it is bewitching, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Kim... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
As always you've written a near perfect haiku, and as usual you've done it with aplomb, such a lovely post, a great satori line, which gives a classy finish to your post, well done, blessings Roy
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As always you've written a near perfect haiku, and as usual you've done it with aplomb, such a lovely post, a great satori line, which gives a classy finish to your post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Roy... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
Oooh! Did you already enter another haiku for the contest? This is lovely with the personification of the poetic moon who "whispers sonnets." You explain that gravitational pull so poetically!!
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Oooh! Did you already enter another haiku for the contest? This is lovely with the personification of the poetic moon who "whispers sonnets." You explain that gravitational pull so poetically!!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Helen... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!! I do have another verse entered for the contest... I just wanted to write a Haiku. :)
Melissa
Melissa
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this is perfect :"the moon leans in to
whisper sonnets to the breeze
bewitching the earth: Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writigs.
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Wow, this is perfect :"the moon leans in to
whisper sonnets to the breeze
bewitching the earth: Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writigs.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Iza... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great short poem. I love the phrases leans in and the last line--bewitching the earth. Well done. How do you feel about your Razorbacks this year? Hope all is well.
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Great short poem. I love the phrases leans in and the last line--bewitching the earth. Well done. How do you feel about your Razorbacks this year? Hope all is well.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2022
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Hello Tim... thank you so much for the lovely review. I am thrilled you like it and really appreciate your comments!! About them Hogs... as of yesterday, the Razorback baseball team won their game and is going to the College World Series in Omaha. I am an avid fan of the team and cannot wait to see them play... as for football, I can't see it through waving baseball bats. LOL. But, when Football season starts... I'm all in :)
Melissa
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Cool, I played college baseball and then played in the minor leagues for a few years before going to law school. Baseball is my favorite sport!
