Moonlight Magic
A Duodecatain24 total reviews
Comment from leather
Oh, the illustration is so beautiful it is almost a poem in itself. Plus you did a wonderful job of picking out text and background colors.
The couplet, I assume, refers to the last two lines. If so, does it rhyme with 'ee' as rule number five requires? I may be missing something.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Oh, the illustration is so beautiful it is almost a poem in itself. Plus you did a wonderful job of picking out text and background colors.
The couplet, I assume, refers to the last two lines. If so, does it rhyme with 'ee' as rule number five requires? I may be missing something.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Yes, it does. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Pantygynt
Thanks for this nod to Tom Reischel. We haven't heard from him for a very long time. You have used his form to spin some truly magic imagery in this piece about the fairies' moonlit terpsichorean activities.
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thanks for this nod to Tom Reischel. We haven't heard from him for a very long time. You have used his form to spin some truly magic imagery in this piece about the fairies' moonlit terpsichorean activities.
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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I think of him often. Has he left FS? Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Moonlight magic - what exquisite words to describe that time when daylight ends and the moon sheds its light on the world. I like you idea of the fairies dancing in its rays. Very well done.
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Moonlight magic - what exquisite words to describe that time when daylight ends and the moon sheds its light on the world. I like you idea of the fairies dancing in its rays. Very well done.
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Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you for a lovely review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from livelylinda
Damommy: Such a beautiful poem. The rhythm and rhyme make it a delight to read, can almost sing it! The form is perfect and the picture captures it is color. Wouldn't change a thing! Linda
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Damommy: Such a beautiful poem. The rhythm and rhyme make it a delight to read, can almost sing it! The form is perfect and the picture captures it is color. Wouldn't change a thing! Linda
Comment Written 11-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review.
