Languid Ease
a Minute poetic form28 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
Your minute poem for the contest is just lovely. I like the way you chose to rhyme it, and the meter is great. It's peaceful, but I confess that if I were Monet's model, he'd have to paint me between sneezes! Lol. Have a blessed week.
Carol
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Your minute poem for the contest is just lovely. I like the way you chose to rhyme it, and the meter is great. It's peaceful, but I confess that if I were Monet's model, he'd have to paint me between sneezes! Lol. Have a blessed week.
Carol
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Haha... your sneezes remind me of my own... we have pollen everywhere and I am sneezing too. LOL. Thank you so much Carol!!
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
I like Monet, Melissa. :) His paintings are sweet and calming. Your poem flows very well with the feelings that lady must be feeling. I wish I had the luxury to enjoy the gentle breeze and smell the flowers, but it's cold and nothing grows. :) This is a good entry for the Minute Poem Contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I like Monet, Melissa. :) His paintings are sweet and calming. Your poem flows very well with the feelings that lady must be feeling. I wish I had the luxury to enjoy the gentle breeze and smell the flowers, but it's cold and nothing grows. :) This is a good entry for the Minute Poem Contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you Jose. Glad you liked it. You should be feeling gentle breezes down there in south Texas. Hope your springtime is lovely!
Melissa
Comment from Pangalactic
A beauty of a minute poem you've crafted here.
A lullaby for the weary mind.
Beautiful rhymes throughout and pleasant imagery for these my drowzy eyes
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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A beauty of a minute poem you've crafted here.
A lullaby for the weary mind.
Beautiful rhymes throughout and pleasant imagery for these my drowzy eyes
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much...I am delighted that you enjoyed this 'sleepy' poem... LOL
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A dreamy relaxing afternoon here Melissa and I'm loving that opening line to introduce us to this peaceful warm afternoon, much enjoyed, well rhymed and perfect for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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A dreamy relaxing afternoon here Melissa and I'm loving that opening line to introduce us to this peaceful warm afternoon, much enjoyed, well rhymed and perfect for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Thank you, dear friend. I nearly put myself to sleep writing it. LOL :)
Melissa
Comment from royowen
This is one of those perfect poems, that comes together with the artwork, the great melding of the two together. Great descriptive text, with some except wording, the lagusgr is perfect, well done Melissa, , blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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This is one of those perfect poems, that comes together with the artwork, the great melding of the two together. Great descriptive text, with some except wording, the lagusgr is perfect, well done Melissa, , blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Hello Roy. Thank you for your wonderful review. I nearly put myself to sleep writing it LOL... hugs!!
Melissa
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Hah hah I?ll bet.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I remember what you said about the Minute poem in the class. Haha. It's a perfect poem for our meter class. I will see whether I will have time to write one, too.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I remember what you said about the Minute poem in the class. Haha. It's a perfect poem for our meter class. I will see whether I will have time to write one, too.
Well done.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Hi Lisa. Thanks so much. This is definitely written in Iambic meter and perhaps Jim will use it to show that form to Jemela. I really appreciate your comments on it!!! Hugs.
Melissa
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Yes. This is a very artistic and aristocratic piece. I like the painting, too.
Hugs
Comment from Jenifer Bellott
I am SO glad that I had a "six star" left to give! This was the PERFECT poem to describe a lazy summer day. "Small, golden motes drift in the wind" was my favorite line. A past time of mine since childhood has been finding and following sunlit specks of dust that sparkle as they float. Your description of the summer sky and the drowsiness of a beautiful warm day was on point. So much that I found myself craving a nap. Superb job!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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I am SO glad that I had a "six star" left to give! This was the PERFECT poem to describe a lazy summer day. "Small, golden motes drift in the wind" was my favorite line. A past time of mine since childhood has been finding and following sunlit specks of dust that sparkle as they float. Your description of the summer sky and the drowsiness of a beautiful warm day was on point. So much that I found myself craving a nap. Superb job!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Hi Jenifer. Thanks so much for your lovely review. So glad you liked it. The Minute poem is one of my favorite. It is the form where I first learned to write in meter... it holds a special place in my heart. I like to watch motes float around too... especially on lazy summer days :) I appreciate your comments.
Melissa
Comment from Tom Horonzy
At first, I said whoa. What does this poem speak of, and then I looked up 'minute' contest and went back to read again, counting syllables. In doing so, I found it understandable. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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At first, I said whoa. What does this poem speak of, and then I looked up 'minute' contest and went back to read again, counting syllables. In doing so, I found it understandable. Good luck.
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2022
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Hi Tom. Thanks so much for your fun review. Glad it passed muster. The Minute poem is one of my favorite. It is the form where I first learned to write in meter... it holds a special place in my heart. I appreciate your comments.
Melissa
