Football - A Novel
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Comment from Begin Again
You have me questioning myself now....not that anyone would even ask, but I guess I should think about things like that. I love your story as always, Brbara. The emotions are so accurate and the love is so wonderful when the reader can feel it pouring from each word.
Always, Carol
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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You have me questioning myself now....not that anyone would even ask, but I guess I should think about things like that. I love your story as always, Brbara. The emotions are so accurate and the love is so wonderful when the reader can feel it pouring from each word.
Always, Carol
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. PM if you need to.
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Thanks!
Comment from Judy Lawless
This part of your story is coming across as the most real of any of it, Barbara, and that's because you know the topic from experience. I would never question your choices in this. I really enjoy reading this novel.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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This part of your story is coming across as the most real of any of it, Barbara, and that's because you know the topic from experience. I would never question your choices in this. I really enjoy reading this novel.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from damommy
I want to know where Katherine found Gabriel. Does he have a brother? Never mind. He probably wouldn't be as good as Gabriel. This is a fictionalized version of your life? It's been very interesting and I'm eager to read more.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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I want to know where Katherine found Gabriel. Does he have a brother? Never mind. He probably wouldn't be as good as Gabriel. This is a fictionalized version of your life? It's been very interesting and I'm eager to read more.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Gabriel is an only child. It's been mention in a previous post. LOL I do agree. Thank you for the kind review.
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I remember. I was kidding. lol.
Comment from BethShelby
If you have go though cancer treatment, it is good to have friends to make sure you don't do it alone. I know the treatment makes you extremely tired, so it much have been hard for you to keep working. The story is great and Gabriel is proving how much he cares, not that there was any doubt.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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If you have go though cancer treatment, it is good to have friends to make sure you don't do it alone. I know the treatment makes you extremely tired, so it much have been hard for you to keep working. The story is great and Gabriel is proving how much he cares, not that there was any doubt.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Another fine reading chapter. You are giving your protagonist a lot of support. It sounds like your boys also supported you. Great job my friend. Shirley
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Another fine reading chapter. You are giving your protagonist a lot of support. It sounds like your boys also supported you. Great job my friend. Shirley
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
'great chapter that weaves together the football theme, the UT coaches visit, and the mom's cancer and her weakness. I appreciated the note at the end of the post about your own experience!
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'great chapter that weaves together the football theme, the UT coaches visit, and the mom's cancer and her weakness. I appreciated the note at the end of the post about your own experience!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was great reading. You moved your story along nicely. Only in Texas are high school football games televised. I don't see any room for improvement. Thanks for sharing about yourself.
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This was great reading. You moved your story along nicely. Only in Texas are high school football games televised. I don't see any room for improvement. Thanks for sharing about yourself.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Football rules here.
Comment from nomi338
I owe you a possible apology. I am so engrossed in reading the story that I basically ignore any small error. I correctly assume that among your many readers someone will point out any mistakes. Reading this wonderful story, I am impressed by the level of love and support Katherine is receiving from her tribe of supportive friends and family. This no doubt makes things a lot easier to deal with.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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I owe you a possible apology. I am so engrossed in reading the story that I basically ignore any small error. I correctly assume that among your many readers someone will point out any mistakes. Reading this wonderful story, I am impressed by the level of love and support Katherine is receiving from her tribe of supportive friends and family. This no doubt makes things a lot easier to deal with.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review and understanding.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I forgot about the cancer Katherine has. That will be a complication for her relationship with Gabriel. How will she tell him? It looks like an autobiographic book so you know what to do.
I hope you are cancer free now. It's very curable now for many different kinds. My mother had cancel about 8 years ago and she is still around. She is 85.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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I forgot about the cancer Katherine has. That will be a complication for her relationship with Gabriel. How will she tell him? It looks like an autobiographic book so you know what to do.
I hope you are cancer free now. It's very curable now for many different kinds. My mother had cancel about 8 years ago and she is still around. She is 85.
Well done.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. My doctor told me you are never cured of cancer, it's in remission.
Comment from lancellot
A well written slice of life chapter. The family and close friends showing their love and support of Katherine. A football game in the background. Gabe expressing his love for all to see. They love each other. The lying grandparents are gone. There are no 'Real' obstacles to block their romance. So....
Is this the end of the novel?
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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A well written slice of life chapter. The family and close friends showing their love and support of Katherine. A football game in the background. Gabe expressing his love for all to see. They love each other. The lying grandparents are gone. There are no 'Real' obstacles to block their romance. So....
Is this the end of the novel?
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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You will see there are obstacles, just be patient. Thank you for reading.