To Ride a Unicorn
A poem42 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Beautiful! What a lovely poem, my dear SATP. We travelled the universe with your unicorn looking for those answers we don't know. Then you suddenly realise the answers are all in that special book, the Bible! It is surprising how after thousands of years ago, when the Bible was first written, the answers to todays questions are there for us to discover. Amazing! I loved this one, perfect for the here and now. Love and hugs, Sandra. xxx
I'm in all day with no visitors, so call me when you are ready for a chat. We came home later than we intended last night and I just tumbled into bed. xxxxxx
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Beautiful! What a lovely poem, my dear SATP. We travelled the universe with your unicorn looking for those answers we don't know. Then you suddenly realise the answers are all in that special book, the Bible! It is surprising how after thousands of years ago, when the Bible was first written, the answers to todays questions are there for us to discover. Amazing! I loved this one, perfect for the here and now. Love and hugs, Sandra. xxx
I'm in all day with no visitors, so call me when you are ready for a chat. We came home later than we intended last night and I just tumbled into bed. xxxxxx
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review and stars! I will try to call you later, if that's okay. I have some things I must attend to first. Looking forward to a chat.
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That would be lovely. xxxx
Comment from Pearl Edwards
There is a lovely flow to your fantasy/spiritual poem Yvonne. I like the idea of dashing around on a unicorn, maybe finding answers to some of the universal questions. Nice one, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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There is a lovely flow to your fantasy/spiritual poem Yvonne. I like the idea of dashing around on a unicorn, maybe finding answers to some of the universal questions. Nice one, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much, Valda. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine fantasy write with positive words to help us all battle on to here those angels sing. We all deserve a break and I hope our future is bright, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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A fine fantasy write with positive words to help us all battle on to here those angels sing. We all deserve a break and I hope our future is bright, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you. I'm so glad.
Comment from TPAC
Perfect. I see no need for improvements, given script holding all appealing aspects, detailing a strong poetic structuring throughout its course read. I found the statements adventurous, captivating to my imagination, holding a great punch for its conclusion. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Perfect. I see no need for improvements, given script holding all appealing aspects, detailing a strong poetic structuring throughout its course read. I found the statements adventurous, captivating to my imagination, holding a great punch for its conclusion. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and for the lovely stars.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Wow! Unicorns are so beautiful and carry so much mystique but seldom do I really feel that passed on to the reader.
You have captured those things and so much with the spirituality and magic within your words.
An engaging and hauntingly beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing your talent with the world.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Wow! Unicorns are so beautiful and carry so much mystique but seldom do I really feel that passed on to the reader.
You have captured those things and so much with the spirituality and magic within your words.
An engaging and hauntingly beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing your talent with the world.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written poem 'To Ride a Unicorn' you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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This is a very nice and well written poem 'To Ride a Unicorn' you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Teri.
Comment from Gee
Very nicely done.
Though yes, I agree God's word is all you need.
Riding the unicorn would be fun through the stars.
I'm glad you used rhyming.
I guess I'm a traditionalist, like to see the rhyming.
Some of this free verse stuff makes no sense to me.
I guess I have a little brain or something.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Very nicely done.
Though yes, I agree God's word is all you need.
Riding the unicorn would be fun through the stars.
I'm glad you used rhyming.
I guess I'm a traditionalist, like to see the rhyming.
Some of this free verse stuff makes no sense to me.
I guess I have a little brain or something.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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I like rhyming best, too, although I dabble in free verse. Thank you for a great review.
Comment from robyn corum
Yvonne,
Absolutely. There are plenty of things we still want to wonder about. *smile* God gave us a brain - a very nice, sizable brain that is quite wondrous and works ingeniously. (For some better than others.)
It's enough to know that there will be opportunities to ask those questions at some point -- IF we live correctly and please God. *smile* Won't it be wonderful to have all knowledge and to have all those answers???? Wow. Thanks, friend!
I'd love to ride a unicorn right beside you. How stinking cool would THAT be?
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Yvonne,
Absolutely. There are plenty of things we still want to wonder about. *smile* God gave us a brain - a very nice, sizable brain that is quite wondrous and works ingeniously. (For some better than others.)
It's enough to know that there will be opportunities to ask those questions at some point -- IF we live correctly and please God. *smile* Won't it be wonderful to have all knowledge and to have all those answers???? Wow. Thanks, friend!
I'd love to ride a unicorn right beside you. How stinking cool would THAT be?
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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It would be very cool! Thanks, Robyn.
Comment from zanya
What a delightful poem inviting the reader to come along and 'dash around the Universe' and perhaps find answers to some of 'the mysteries/of time'- a wonderful realisation emerging at the end
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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What a delightful poem inviting the reader to come along and 'dash around the Universe' and perhaps find answers to some of 'the mysteries/of time'- a wonderful realisation emerging at the end
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
Comment from tfawcus
A lovely flight of fancy, Yvonne, that comes safely back down to earth. Mythological beasts and places may inhabit our imagination for a while but, as your poem wisely states, the fundamental truths lie closer to home.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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A lovely flight of fancy, Yvonne, that comes safely back down to earth. Mythological beasts and places may inhabit our imagination for a while but, as your poem wisely states, the fundamental truths lie closer to home.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Tony. Good to hear from you. Merry Christmas!
