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SimianSavant
Nepoleon => Napoleon
members.Shame => missing space
Many of these saying => sayings
You have been weighed in the balance and found wanting"**PERIOD** To this day when we say this, we mean **THAT** it is too late, **AND** the thing we dread will surely happen.
Thanks for the read!
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
Thanks for the head up on errors. I fixed them. We have a published reviewer on this site that says her editor says never use the word 'that' if you can possibly avoid it. She goes around taking all my 'thats" out. Her editor says it is not usually needed. So I'm, trying not to use it.