Sometimes Love Hurts
Ain't Love Grand...48 total reviews
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A very creative post. Amusing short poem accompanied by an equally amusing picture. Looks like they are destined to be in love's grip forever!:) Well done. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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A very creative post. Amusing short poem accompanied by an equally amusing picture. Looks like they are destined to be in love's grip forever!:) Well done. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I certainly hope so... thanks for stopping by and review Seshadri...
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a playfully metaphorical poem about how love sometimes brings problems and pain.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Dragonpoet
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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This is a playfully metaphorical poem about how love sometimes brings problems and pain.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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thanks for your insight and the 5 beautiful stars.
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Don?t mention it
Dp
Comment from Frances Jean
What a unique picture - the contrast in colour and the way they lay entwined. It must have been photo shopped! Your poem is short, cute and certainly fulfils the requirements of the competition. Good luck Franky
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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What a unique picture - the contrast in colour and the way they lay entwined. It must have been photo shopped! Your poem is short, cute and certainly fulfils the requirements of the competition. Good luck Franky
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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No not photoshopped just a quirky moment... thanks for your review Frankie...
Comment from Paul McFarland
Five stars for the poem. Six stars for the picture. Did you have to drug the cats? This should do very well in the contest. If only people could get along like this.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Five stars for the poem. Six stars for the picture. Did you have to drug the cats? This should do very well in the contest. If only people could get along like this.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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the cats were perfectly sober I will have you know... thanks for the review.
Comment from Hitcher
The picture is so cute, the cat lovers on site are going LOVE IT.
I am not a cat lover myself... But own one of course( wife and two daughters out voted me for a dog ). I have come to enjoy its pressence when it graces me with it. Good luck, it made me smile ; )
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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The picture is so cute, the cat lovers on site are going LOVE IT.
I am not a cat lover myself... But own one of course( wife and two daughters out voted me for a dog ). I have come to enjoy its pressence when it graces me with it. Good luck, it made me smile ; )
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Of course... it is often a girl thing... but I bet you secretly like him/her... thanks for the review.
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Very secretly ; ))
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Big Smile!
Comment from palmart
A top-creative poem! Thank you very much for sharing your perceptions and point of view! Picture is definitively great and the heart of the tails gives a perfect closure! Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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A top-creative poem! Thank you very much for sharing your perceptions and point of view! Picture is definitively great and the heart of the tails gives a perfect closure! Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Hey, Hey... again I am truly honored by the review and doing a happy dance...!!!!
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You shine in this planet, Artasylum! You can make it happen!!
You really deserved it!!
God bless you!
Comment from pookietoo
I love the photo of theh cats. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I wish you luck in the contest. Have a nice night, Take care, nd keep smiling, :)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I love the photo of theh cats. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I wish you luck in the contest. Have a nice night, Take care, nd keep smiling, :)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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thanks for the wishes pookie
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Welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. That's an incredible picture and your 5-7-5 poem is an ekphrastic one because it describes the photo and adds a little humor to it also. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Lol. That's an incredible picture and your 5-7-5 poem is an ekphrastic one because it describes the photo and adds a little humor to it also. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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thanks so much... the photo is sweet and getting stuck not so much
Comment from SMASH52
The first two lines are complemented by the photo. The third line takes the reader out of the poem and the photo, especially the profanity. The tails don't appear jammed and the scene is far too calming for a "whoops".
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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The first two lines are complemented by the photo. The third line takes the reader out of the poem and the photo, especially the profanity. The tails don't appear jammed and the scene is far too calming for a "whoops".
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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thanks so much
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Hope to have the pleasure of reading a revised Sometimes...
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love this cute picture you've used for your (very) witty animal 5-7-5 poem. Love the final line, and am left wondering how the photographer got them to pose LOL
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I love this cute picture you've used for your (very) witty animal 5-7-5 poem. Love the final line, and am left wondering how the photographer got them to pose LOL
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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just plain dumb luck!
