Flurry from a Field
Crows take flight -43 total reviews
Comment from amahra
I suspected that painting was Van Gogh; his artwork always makes mr feel good just looking at those bright dramatic brush strokes. And the poem and font that you use were complimentary to his art.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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I suspected that painting was Van Gogh; his artwork always makes mr feel good just looking at those bright dramatic brush strokes. And the poem and font that you use were complimentary to his art.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Amahra,
What a nice review and encouraging comments! Thank you so much for an interesting critique and thoughts. I appreciate your time to read my work and offer your amazing thoughts.
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Amahra,
What a nice review and encouraging comments! Thank you so much for an interesting critique and thoughts. I appreciate your time to read my work and offer your amazing thoughts.
Always,
Senyai
Comment from LJbutterfly
I really appreciate your author's notes about the names of groups of various birds, including a murder of crows. It made your poem more enjoyable, because it is more easily understood. Great work. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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I really appreciate your author's notes about the names of groups of various birds, including a murder of crows. It made your poem more enjoyable, because it is more easily understood. Great work. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi LJ butterfly,
Oh, thank you so much for a most interesting and encouraging review! I am truly appreciative of your time to read and critique?
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi LJ butterfly,
Oh, thank you so much for a most interesting and encouraging review! I am truly appreciative of your time to read and critique?
All the best,
Senyai
Comment from MAMONIA
Wow! I wasn't expecting such an in-depth description of this short poem, but I get it.
This is a perfect explanation of Van Gogh's painting of the wheatfields, and you have done a magnificent job with the wording.
But, you have given a beautiful sentiment and a logical reason for writing this piece.
Eloquent.
Marie
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Wow! I wasn't expecting such an in-depth description of this short poem, but I get it.
This is a perfect explanation of Van Gogh's painting of the wheatfields, and you have done a magnificent job with the wording.
But, you have given a beautiful sentiment and a logical reason for writing this piece.
Eloquent.
Marie
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Marie,
Thank you very much for an amazing review and encouraging thoughts on my little 5-7-5 ? yes, I love this painting ?Wheatfield with Crows? by Van Gogh? so I thought I?d write how it made me feel as if I were standing in that field.
I appreciate your time to read and critique :))
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Marie,
Thank you very much for an amazing review and encouraging thoughts on my little 5-7-5 ? yes, I love this painting ?Wheatfield with Crows? by Van Gogh? so I thought I?d write how it made me feel as if I were standing in that field.
I appreciate your time to read and critique :))
All the best,
Senyai
Comment from karenina
Wicked good! (It's an old Boston phrase)---
Love the tone of this 5-7-5 and it's just absolutely perfect paired with Van Gogh's art.
My senses are saturated with your well chosen words. Nature is amazing...
Perhaps this was a foreboding, for him...perhaps those that interpret it as such are right!
Meanwhile--stellar work!
(Sadly, I only have five "stellars" to give...)
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Wicked good! (It's an old Boston phrase)---
Love the tone of this 5-7-5 and it's just absolutely perfect paired with Van Gogh's art.
My senses are saturated with your well chosen words. Nature is amazing...
Perhaps this was a foreboding, for him...perhaps those that interpret it as such are right!
Meanwhile--stellar work!
(Sadly, I only have five "stellars" to give...)
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Karenina!
Hope you are feeling better! So good to hear from you again. Yes, I have always loved this painting by Van Gogh so thought I?d write how it made me feel when I looked at it.
You are a dear, Karenina. Get well, ok ? know there?s sunny days ahead for you ❤️ as I gaze into my crystal ball?.
Nothing but the best for you :))
Senyai
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Hi Karenina!
Hope you are feeling better! So good to hear from you again. Yes, I have always loved this painting by Van Gogh so thought I?d write how it made me feel when I looked at it.
You are a dear, Karenina. Get well, ok ? know there?s sunny days ahead for you ❤️ as I gaze into my crystal ball?.
Nothing but the best for you :))
Senyai
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He was a mad genius. I've always loved his work. Yours as well! :)
Karenina
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Raul,
Thank you sir, for an awesome review and encouraging comments! You have made my day :))
Have a wonderful rest of your week, Raul
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely 5/7/5 poem showcasing the Van Gogh painting with your well chosen words.
Thank you also for your notes and the reminder of the various groups of birds. I used to know all the groups but alas, I have forgotten some so this was a great reminder.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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A lovely 5/7/5 poem showcasing the Van Gogh painting with your well chosen words.
Thank you also for your notes and the reminder of the various groups of birds. I used to know all the groups but alas, I have forgotten some so this was a great reminder.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Janet,
I understand, I had to look up the collective nouns too. Easy to forget what we don?t use every day.
Thank you for an amazing review and encouraging comments, Janet. Truly appreciated!
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Janet,
I understand, I had to look up the collective nouns too. Easy to forget what we don?t use every day.
Thank you for an amazing review and encouraging comments, Janet. Truly appreciated!
All the best,
Senyai
Comment from royowen
Isn't it funny, that we will mould the artistic mind into what we like to think it's saying. Sometimes I may look at a poem I've written, and think, "What the...?" But I'm wandering what others think, but I'm not thinking anything, the subconscious is an amazing place, or perhaps my thoughts are merely connected to...? Well done Senyai, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Isn't it funny, that we will mould the artistic mind into what we like to think it's saying. Sometimes I may look at a poem I've written, and think, "What the...?" But I'm wandering what others think, but I'm not thinking anything, the subconscious is an amazing place, or perhaps my thoughts are merely connected to...? Well done Senyai, good job, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Roy,
Wow, yes, I feel what you are saying! I look at my poems and they stare back foreign looking. Like did I actually write this? LOL. What state of mind was I in when I wrote that?
I have always loved the painting ?Wheatfield with Crows? by Van Gogh so I thought I?ll write about what I feel when I look at it. Damp earth, just rained on the wheat and crows everywhere?
Thank you as always for your excellent critique and encouraging words on my work. I truly appreciate both so much!
All the best, Roy :))
Senyai
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Excellent job
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Hi Roy,
Wow, yes, I feel what you are saying! I look at my poems and they stare back foreign looking. Like did I actually write this? LOL. What state of mind was I in when I wrote that?
I have always loved the painting ?Wheatfield with Crows? by Van Gogh so I thought I?ll write about what I feel when I look at it. Damp earth, just rained on the wheat and crows everywhere?
Thank you as always for your excellent critique and encouraging words on my work. I truly appreciate both so much!
All the best, Roy :))
Senyai
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Thank you, Roy ❤️
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words to be vivid, interesting, descriptive and creative.
Thank you so much for the author's notes - all my questions were answered! I thought about the theme of these words as I look more closely at this amazing artwork. The poem flows and connects well.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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I found the author's words to be vivid, interesting, descriptive and creative.
Thank you so much for the author's notes - all my questions were answered! I thought about the theme of these words as I look more closely at this amazing artwork. The poem flows and connects well.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Harmony,
Thanks so much for an awesome review and encouraging comments. They are both truly appreciated :))
Have a great week!
Senyai
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Hi Harmony,
Thanks so much for an awesome review and encouraging comments. They are both truly appreciated :))
Have a great week!
Senyai
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest about the crows in the field. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest about the crows in the field. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021
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Hi Teri,
Oh thank you so much for a wonderful review and encouraging comments.
I truly appreciate your time to read and critique my work.
Have an awesome rest of your week :))
Senyai
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Hi Teri,
Oh thank you so much for a wonderful review and encouraging comments.
I truly appreciate your time to read and critique my work.
Have an awesome rest of your week :))
Senyai
Comment from nomi338
Those corn stealing crows are no doubt up to no good yet again. They are or at least seem to be always up to no good. Murder of crows indeed, more like murdering crows. The way the can devastate a corn crop in mere minutes. I tell you, they are no good vagabonds who ought to be driven out.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Those corn stealing crows are no doubt up to no good yet again. They are or at least seem to be always up to no good. Murder of crows indeed, more like murdering crows. The way the can devastate a corn crop in mere minutes. I tell you, they are no good vagabonds who ought to be driven out.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
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Hi Nomi,
Hahaha! You?re right ? darned crows, the harbingers of fall.
Thanks for a most interesting review and great thoughts on my short poem.
I appreciate your take on my work.
Have a superb week :))
Senyai
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Hi Nomi,
Hahaha! You?re right ? darned crows, the harbingers of fall.
Thanks for a most interesting review and great thoughts on my short poem.
I appreciate your take on my work.
Have a superb week :))
Senyai