Autumn seduces
5-7-5 contest entry44 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem It is a perfect match You captured my attention from the first word to the last.Your words are few but, it told a lot.
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem It is a perfect match You captured my attention from the first word to the last.Your words are few but, it told a lot.
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Miss Cookie, thank you for this beautiful sixer, my friend. I am happy this piece is so well received.
God bless!
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your very welcome, peace be with you
cookie
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You as well.
Comment from Jeffrey Mitchell
Very nice Ode, three lines but more spoken with out the words. A poem that go on in your mind after the words have end. Thank you for sharing your feelings of your Ode with us.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Very nice Ode, three lines but more spoken with out the words. A poem that go on in your mind after the words have end. Thank you for sharing your feelings of your Ode with us.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey for this awesome review.
God bless!
Comment from mermaids
Excellent haiku form that creates a clear picture of nature. I am definitely seduced by Autumn and then the trees are bare
This is a perfect scene of the change of seasons.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Excellent haiku form that creates a clear picture of nature. I am definitely seduced by Autumn and then the trees are bare
This is a perfect scene of the change of seasons.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Me too! I love this time of the year. Thank you for the awesome review, my friend.
God bless!
Comment from lancellot
Ha, I have never thought about it like that. Spring covers things up and Summer heats things so people and eventually nature has to shed items, then Autumn comes and just drops everything down to bareness. Summer leaves and winter comes and covers the world again.
Very nice. Great idea.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Ha, I have never thought about it like that. Spring covers things up and Summer heats things so people and eventually nature has to shed items, then Autumn comes and just drops everything down to bareness. Summer leaves and winter comes and covers the world again.
Very nice. Great idea.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Right you are, lancellot. Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless~
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Love the personification in your well-crafted 5/7/5! Wonderful visuals as well!
Thank you for sharing and best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Love the personification in your well-crafted 5/7/5! Wonderful visuals as well!
Thank you for sharing and best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review, Mrs. KT
God bless
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, a very well written short 5/7/5 poem. Good personification of Autumn and Summer. Very clever - the leaves fall and the tree is bare-naked. Good luck with this good entry. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Hello anon, a very well written short 5/7/5 poem. Good personification of Autumn and Summer. Very clever - the leaves fall and the tree is bare-naked. Good luck with this good entry. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Dorothy, for another awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Comment from djsaxon
Great pic and excellent imagery in the write.
"seduces Summer into submission" - made all the more evocative with the clever use of allit. The closer is terrific. All the best in the Prompt. Cheers - DJ
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Great pic and excellent imagery in the write.
"seduces Summer into submission" - made all the more evocative with the clever use of allit. The closer is terrific. All the best in the Prompt. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this inspiring review, my friend.
God bless
Comment from juliaSjames
Nice analogy. Autumn stripping a compliant summer of her leafy garments adds an erotic touch to the change of season.
The s alliteration is a poetic bonus.
Good luck in the prompt.
Stay safe and healthy
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Nice analogy. Autumn stripping a compliant summer of her leafy garments adds an erotic touch to the change of season.
The s alliteration is a poetic bonus.
Good luck in the prompt.
Stay safe and healthy
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Julia. This is my favorite season of all.
God bless!
Comment from royowen
Yes it's true that autumn causes the trees to disrobe, and those verdant green Clothes, become akin to Joseph's coat, and then they take that coat off, well done, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Yes it's true that autumn causes the trees to disrobe, and those verdant green Clothes, become akin to Joseph's coat, and then they take that coat off, well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Ah! Joseph's coat, I love the comparison, Roy. Thank you for the awesome review, my friend.
God bless!
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Good job
Comment from Reese Turner
As well said as the prompt allowed, and might be true in your corner of the planet, but in Texas, Summer is neither seduced nor reduced until turkeys run for cover.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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As well said as the prompt allowed, and might be true in your corner of the planet, but in Texas, Summer is neither seduced nor reduced until turkeys run for cover.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Lol! I understand. Near Houston, Tx here. I do love the fact that fall lasts through most of the Winter.
Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
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Hi neighbor! From Bellville (just north of Sealy) where golf is played year round.
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Lol! I suppose it is.