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My Undying Devotion!

Praising God for The Gift of Her!

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Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
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Hi Fonda! Great poetry...it flows really smoothly
selection is the prerogative of god and it seems you have understood this and conveyed really well through your poetry...Thanks for Sharing!!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
reply by Saria/Shreyamsi on 16-Oct-2020
    your welcome...keep writing:)
Comment from Colin John
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Hi Fonda, seems like God made a good choice as you show in your admiration for his selection and she I guess would say the same about you and his choice, many thanks for sharing kind regards Colin

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
reply by Colin John on 16-Oct-2020
    No problem.
Comment from A. Fortier
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FondaLittle,
This is a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. I can only hope the person this poem is about knows how kindly you think of them. Praise God! Very lovely poem. I would give it 6 stars if I could!
Cheers,
A.Fortier

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is a lovely, vividly descriptive love poem that touched my heart. God is the Source of all good things--for example, the perfect choice of wife for you. You give credit where credit is due--Him. Your joy is clear! :-)

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Frank Jauregui
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Undying devotion is what our Holy God requires of us and when he makes two come together as husband and wife and the two then become one and agree in this devotion to God, the power of God is just multiplied many times over because he is there in the midst of them. "For where two or three are gathered together in my name, there am I in the midst of them. " Matthew 18:20. Great job with this poem!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from RGstar
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Happy anniversary to you. It is so nice that you have found common ground in faith. Faith has many faces and many functions, and that which you find brings you solace and purpose, and joined n love, may it be always.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from RShipp
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"She is far beyond,
what I expected!"
What a great opening line. Wouldn't it be great to surprise God and here Him say those words. (Although, I don't know if we can surprise God?)

Best of luck in the Love Poem Poetry Contest.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Praising God for The Gift of Her!
My Undying Devotion!
by Fonda Little

Hello, Fonda,

A very nice love poem for your girlfriend and God. You feel grateful for her and that's so sweet...she must be pleased. Good job congratulations on the 15 months.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from mermaids
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There is a feeling of faith based love in your words. You have a smooth flow of verses and lines that adds to your theme. Congratulations on your relationship. Your words reflect the Lord speaking through you.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Cindy Decker
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Fonda: such an awesome poem. I get that it's about the Blessed Mary and Jesus. Many Catholics venerate her; and you express this well in your writing. It's truly beautiful!
Blessings,
Good luck with all your writing.
Cindy

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!