Waterway to Eternity
You have to believe that, in the end, it'll all be worth it42 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Yvette, This is a very lovely and well written Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Yvette, This is a very lovely and well written Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Teri -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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you are so welcome my friend! love you!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are colorful, interesting, and creative. I pondered
on the words of this poem. I really like the last line - it brought me
to a place of peace. The artwork is beautiful and compliments this poem.
Hope you had a great day!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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The author's words are colorful, interesting, and creative. I pondered
on the words of this poem. I really like the last line - it brought me
to a place of peace. The artwork is beautiful and compliments this poem.
Hope you had a great day!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Maria -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
What a beckoning imagine you selected to match your words. I admired your emotional, Four-Line Poem and the abundant use of alliteration to intensify it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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What a beckoning imagine you selected to match your words. I admired your emotional, Four-Line Poem and the abundant use of alliteration to intensify it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Joan -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You always manage to exploit the essence even in a succinct form. Cheers- Joan
Comment from Loren .
Love the way you were able to blend the font colors. Of course that say nothing regarding the aim of the poem, which was eloquent and had a great ending, in that it is love that is the ultimate balm for our journey through life. At least that's what a garnered from this beautiful work. Loren
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Love the way you were able to blend the font colors. Of course that say nothing regarding the aim of the poem, which was eloquent and had a great ending, in that it is love that is the ultimate balm for our journey through life. At least that's what a garnered from this beautiful work. Loren
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Fingerpaints were always such fun!! ;) Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Loren -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette,
This is an excellent poem. I wonder if love's sea has many estuaries where all good love empties into the sea.
This work is short, it has a beautiful message. Thank you for shing it with me. Hope you're well.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Yvette,
This is an excellent poem. I wonder if love's sea has many estuaries where all good love empties into the sea.
This work is short, it has a beautiful message. Thank you for shing it with me. Hope you're well.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Cindy -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. Your concept of tears and the passing of time soothing all the pains of life is an interesting thought. Everyone experiences both the best I can tell. Some people never get over the troubles.
Da Z ð???
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Hello Yvette. Your concept of tears and the passing of time soothing all the pains of life is an interesting thought. Everyone experiences both the best I can tell. Some people never get over the troubles.
Da Z ð???
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Z -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome. The short ones are my favorites as long as they tell a story.
Da Z :~)))
Comment from Lucy de Welles
All elements here. Your creations just get better and better. Lovely watercolor that speaks a thousand words. Text flows smoothly like that stream, and colors changing with the flow of the idea. Black background emphasizes ideas.
Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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All elements here. Your creations just get better and better. Lovely watercolor that speaks a thousand words. Text flows smoothly like that stream, and colors changing with the flow of the idea. Black background emphasizes ideas.
Well done!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, you know how to make a girl smile, Lucy -- those stars are just WONDERFUL!! ; :) Thanx so much for your review on this short one, my lady -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jacob David Collins
Another excellent poem, Yvette. Until we find that perfect person, life does seem a like a never ending twisty stream. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Another excellent poem, Yvette. Until we find that perfect person, life does seem a like a never ending twisty stream. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, J-D -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest, Yvette. Such a few words but indeed words of wisdom. The waters of the world do accumulate somewhere and love is added into the mixture. I liked the picture and the coloring of the font.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Good luck in the contest, Yvette. Such a few words but indeed words of wisdom. The waters of the world do accumulate somewhere and love is added into the mixture. I liked the picture and the coloring of the font.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this short one, Alie -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Yvette - this is a beautiful romantic four line poem. It paints a lovely picture. Well done. I hope that you do well in the contest. Best regards, Jerry
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Yvette - this is a beautiful romantic four line poem. It paints a lovely picture. Well done. I hope that you do well in the contest. Best regards, Jerry
Comment Written 21-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2020
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Oh, you know how to make a girl smile, Jerome -- those stars are just WONDERFUL!! ; :) Thanx so much for your review on this short one, sir -- always a challenge to make sense and even paint a vision within the limitations! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
