A Glass Heart
The nothingness of a lost love.41 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wow--battered almost shattered..flutters..bleeding out. Powerful and fresh--you earn your stars right there. From the pic with wife I trust this is not biographical. Cheers. LIZ
Mike--I'm back to congratulate you on a well-deserved prize! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Wow--battered almost shattered..flutters..bleeding out. Powerful and fresh--you earn your stars right there. From the pic with wife I trust this is not biographical. Cheers. LIZ
Mike--I'm back to congratulate you on a well-deserved prize! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Puzzle
This is beautiful. Lost love is something I'm not sure we ever get past. It's hard to just forget about someone who meant the world to you. Especially if it was true love. This is really well written. It flows nice and I love the layout and picture selection. Good job
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This is beautiful. Lost love is something I'm not sure we ever get past. It's hard to just forget about someone who meant the world to you. Especially if it was true love. This is really well written. It flows nice and I love the layout and picture selection. Good job
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This is a very well written 20 Word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and the art work went perfect with your words. Best wishes in the contest my friend. May God bless you! Teri
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Mike, This is a very well written 20 Word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and the art work went perfect with your words. Best wishes in the contest my friend. May God bless you! Teri
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last moment on a whim. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
Very sad, I wish you had left more author info about what brought you this It seems obvious but then again I can not be accurately sure. Nevertheless it has a deep message in melancholy it has a certain poetic type that gives the words beauty. Thank you for sharing your emotions
Michael
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Very sad, I wish you had left more author info about what brought you this It seems obvious but then again I can not be accurately sure. Nevertheless it has a deep message in melancholy it has a certain poetic type that gives the words beauty. Thank you for sharing your emotions
Michael
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last moment on a whim and just threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this is a stunning write in its plaintive and yearning free verse and dramatic image in complement - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this artfully pensive write...
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, this is a stunning write in its plaintive and yearning free verse and dramatic image in complement - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest with this artfully pensive write...
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last moment on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You're very welcome, Mike, and have a great day and week as well, May God bless you and yours, especially during these trying times...Eve
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
First of all I loved the title, but I almost guarantee you do not have a glass heart (I've read a few of your poems). I'm new here and have enjoyed your work that I have seen so far. Emptiness means there's room to fill again. Thanks for your beautiful words.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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First of all I loved the title, but I almost guarantee you do not have a glass heart (I've read a few of your poems). I'm new here and have enjoyed your work that I have seen so far. Emptiness means there's room to fill again. Thanks for your beautiful words.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last moment and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
A glass heart that is broken is hard to reassemble. I'm reassembling myself after years of just not. It's so hard but in the end it'll be worth it. Sometimes we have to do the work and what makes us uncomfortable so we can be healthy and move on.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A glass heart that is broken is hard to reassemble. I'm reassembling myself after years of just not. It's so hard but in the end it'll be worth it. Sometimes we have to do the work and what makes us uncomfortable so we can be healthy and move on.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last moment on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Bichon
This was truly an amazing poem to read. The description of the fragile heart was vivid and complimenting the poetry style very well. The photo stood out too. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This was truly an amazing poem to read. The description of the fragile heart was vivid and complimenting the poetry style very well. The photo stood out too. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last moment on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply apprecaited!
Have a great day and God bless.
m,ike
Comment from TPAC
A broken heart, living its worst nightmare yielding an end of a bonded trust between parties, finding the cutting pieces of glass in this read harmful. A great emotional reality in my given opinion.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A broken heart, living its worst nightmare yielding an end of a bonded trust between parties, finding the cutting pieces of glass in this read harmful. A great emotional reality in my given opinion.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Badger_29
Outstanding Papa.the form and content here in this excellent I love how it leads up to the bleeding out fading to emptiness.
this leads the reader up to a precipice and then they pull it down with the downfall elhart which beats no more because it's bled out. Very well penned.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Outstanding Papa.the form and content here in this excellent I love how it leads up to the bleeding out fading to emptiness.
this leads the reader up to a precipice and then they pull it down with the downfall elhart which beats no more because it's bled out. Very well penned.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I entered this contest at the last minute on a whim and threw this poem together. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike