Suicide's Surrender
When you think you want to forget, don't...18 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about the decision some victims were forced to do, either jump and die instantly or wait for a slow painful death, I would jump if I have that choice.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about the decision some victims were forced to do, either jump and die instantly or wait for a slow painful death, I would jump if I have that choice.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for your review!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, happy Thursday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Hello fellow poet, happy Thursday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 5-7-5 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Thank you for the rendition of 9/11. It's very interesting to hear other people talk about it. We all saw the same thing that day, but anyone you heard talk about it either saw something in a way or they emotionally felt something different. I know one thing that tore at my heart was people putting up notes looking for others not knowing if they had even gotten out alive or not.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the rendition of 9/11. It's very interesting to hear other people talk about it. We all saw the same thing that day, but anyone you heard talk about it either saw something in a way or they emotionally felt something different. I know one thing that tore at my heart was people putting up notes looking for others not knowing if they had even gotten out alive or not.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I can't imagine having to make that choice. I don't like heights. I can't imagine staying in a burning building either. I wouldn't consider it suicide if I was going to die either way. Sitting here safe at my desk it's impossible to say what I'd do.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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I can't imagine having to make that choice. I don't like heights. I can't imagine staying in a burning building either. I wouldn't consider it suicide if I was going to die either way. Sitting here safe at my desk it's impossible to say what I'd do.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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You are so right. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
The sight, the very thought of those jumers, stays with me always. And yet, as terrified as I am of fire, if I had been there on that day? It could have been me.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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The sight, the very thought of those jumers, stays with me always. And yet, as terrified as I am of fire, if I had been there on that day? It could have been me.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Poet,
It was a terrible choice they had to make. Being burned alive or falling to their death. I remember seeing a person jumping out and flying through the air. Terrorist acts are so cruel because they result in the death of innocents.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Dear Poet,
It was a terrible choice they had to make. Being burned alive or falling to their death. I remember seeing a person jumping out and flying through the air. Terrorist acts are so cruel because they result in the death of innocents.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I stood glued to my TV mesmerized at the sight. . .just so heart-breaking, shocking, painful to watch. . .unbelievable. Your poem says so much in so few words and the artwork also expresses the event. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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I stood glued to my TV mesmerized at the sight. . .just so heart-breaking, shocking, painful to watch. . .unbelievable. Your poem says so much in so few words and the artwork also expresses the event. Good luck.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
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:)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The beautiful and profound poem, the ending is a new beginning "fate's falling angels" - innocent people Good luck with the contest and with your writing.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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The beautiful and profound poem, the ending is a new beginning "fate's falling angels" - innocent people Good luck with the contest and with your writing.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!
