Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Hope and faith can go a long way to help us survive all kinds of challenges and I enjoyed your words here Iza, Not sure if you purposely spelt "confess" wrongly here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019

English my is my third language, I know it's a lame excuse but thank you for pointing out my typo:)

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 03-Sep-2019

Your third language! Wow, this is indeed remarkable! To write poetry in another language shows great talent, love Dolly x

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019

Thank you Ms. Dolly:)

Comment from Sylvia Page

Excellent

All of us writers rely on our muse to pull us through the hurdles of writing.
Your creation is up to the mark. Wishing you success in this contest or else it's time you sacked your muse!
Sylvia

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019

Thank you

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Wow! Those could be words to a song!! Really nice@ The words flowed so easily so after I read it, sang! Even with me singing it, it sounded nice as a song. Think about it!
great job!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019

Thank you so much, you made my day:)

reply by Patty Palmer on 02-Aug-2019

You're welcome!

Comment from MamaBebop

Excellent

Wonderful! It compels me to understand why your faith draws your attention to all things. The line "did I confessed?"--

Should it be {Did I confess?}
Just my preference maybe.
Good luck.

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 Comment Written 02-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019

Thank you for suggestion, my English is broken:) ... competing third in line for attention:)