Comment from aanneee

Excellent

Well the art and color make for a very nice presentation and your words are the icing on the cake, made me laugh. Quite clever indeed and I wish you luck for the Four Line Poem contest - Dinah

 Comment Written 29-May-2018

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018

Hi Dinah, Thank you so much for your lovely review and nice to meet you. Glad you had a laugh and Cheers for the luck wishes we shall see Christine

Comment from misscookie

Good

Well I can truly relate to your poem my muse has left me several times as well as I have left him or her
And that is when I realize I can write also as well without their help
What a wonderful feeling
cookie

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 Comment Written 29-May-2018

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018

Hi Cookie, Thanks for your review always lovely to hear from you Cheers Christine

reply by misscookie on 30-May-2018

You're very welcome, Take care.
cookie

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

How dare she! You'll be just fine thinking for yourself.. nice poem, creative idea. Good luck, thanks for sharing, have a blessed day
Hugs



Trisha

 Comment Written 29-May-2018

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018

Hi Trisha, Thanks for reading and sending me a review and yes how dare she Still not home but expected soon LOL Cheers Christine

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

don't even play like that, Christine. actually it is a well versed little four-liner.
at least you followed the rules, I messed mine up...........meeshu

 Comment Written 29-May-2018

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018

Hi meeshu, Thank for your review and I am sure you did OK ,This was a bit tongue in cheek for me but I have had fun and we shall see. I rarely follow rules LOL Cheers Christine

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Christine,

How rude. Exactly as I might expect my own muse to act. *smile* They give you a few million poems and ideas and think they run the world. --sigh--

hehehe

Thanks! I enjoyed and wish you luck in the voting!

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018

Hi Robyn, Yes they do but sometimes they need to just go so hey mayby I will find another one so her holiday had better be a B good one or look out LOL Cheers Christine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written four line poem. I suppose muses also have rights. They sometimes work on demand for hours at a time. They also need to go in holiday from time to time.

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018

Hi Sandra, Thanks yes but as long as they return she is due home tonight so ai had better leave the light on LOL Cheers Christine

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Love your humor, Christine. Yes, sometimes, it definitely feels that way but I'm glad that you were inspired by the muse leaving to write this four line poem!

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 30-May-2018

Hi Helen, Thank you for your review and my weird sense of humour Ha Ha Muse due back tonight I may put her to work as soon as she arrives. Cheers Christine

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Ha, well at least she left you a note, and perhaps notes is the way to communicate with the traitorous muse. It might lead to something quite productive.

Very fun post, Christine and maybe your muse needs to start lobbying the Contest Committee. HAHA.

I wish you luck.

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 28-May-2018

Hi Gloria, Thank you and as always my weird sense of humour comes to the fore while the muse is away, This is the best I can come up with late at night after a busy day at work LOL Cheers Christine

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I really like this. It is different, and posts about writing are so popular. I don't take much stock in muses, but you made clever use of the muse in this one. "Think for yourself" is the best idea yet. That makes a great ending. Precise as to syllable count. Best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 28-May-2018

Hi Judi, Thanks for reading my poem and I hope my muse finds this as amusing , if not too bad so sad LOL. Tried to be a bit creative with this prompt so on my own for this one Cheers Christine

reply by judiverse on 28-May-2018

HI, Chrissy, and you're welcome. I enjoyed. judi

reply by the author on 28-May-2018

Cheers and have a great day or night it is 6.30 am here in Aussie

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Chrissy, this is a great and really amusing entry to the contest. Has it not dawned on you that your muse is exhausted - all those daily poems over the month, LOL! Give it a rest. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 28-May-2018

Hi Dorothy, Well just a bit of fun for this contest brief, and yes she is still recovering so this is best I can come up with LOL Cheers Christine