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Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Astral Travelling"
Daily poems for April 2018

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Comment from karenina
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You won't find me may-saying. There is much too much out there unexplained and unable to be scientifically debunked. Additionally, as you say, until and unless I experience the sensation who am I to call you out? Many many have written of this astral travel....heck, it made Shirley Maclaine even more popular than she was before! I like the poem! I used to have flying dreams all the time as a child. I miss them!

Karenina

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Karenina, Thanks for ypur review and understanding that you have an open mind to this phenonoma. I have learnt to go along with any strange things and experience and just accept them without question Glad you 'flew" too Cheers Christine
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Comment from lyenochka
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Well, that you have a name for it shows that the Out of Body Experience is really a thing that have been experienced by a number of people. What a great thing to convince oneself to just go with it the experience. Thanks for taking us on the flight with your poem!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi lyenochka, Thanks for stopping by for a fly with me LOL it was a great experience and there is so many unexplained phenonoma one needs to keep an open mind Cheers my friend Christine
Comment from robyn corum
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But then I know another night
I'll fly away once more,
drift up again release my soul
and let my spirit soar.

Christine,

I really liked this poem, sister. I have very vivid, imaginative dreams. I won't get into them, but suffice to say I can relate. *smile* No condemnation from me. haha! Enjoy your travels, my friend!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Robyn, Thanks so much and I am glad you can identify with this maybe we can meet up one night LOL Cheers and great to hear from you. Cheers Christine smile back
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have had that experience and it is very freeing, I was with you on your flying spree here and enjoyed the sights! Let your spirit soar! Loved it Christine, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Dolly, Thanks and it is such a good experience cant explain it but perhaps we have more open minded processes. Our creative selves going out for some material Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem. I believe it is possible akthough I did not have such an experience in my life to confirm it is true. I think that can be a great adventure.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Sandra, Thank s so much and yes it was an adventure scary but lovely ? we are getting to the end of April and not doing so bad Cheers Christine
Comment from damommy
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I believe it's possible, although I've never experienced it.

I enjoyed all the sensations and sights you described. Good rhyme and flow.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Yvonne, Thanks so much for reading an for not thinking I am crazy LOL This was a fun write and the words jist came out
    Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Yvonne, Thanks so much for reading an for not thinking I am crazy LOL This was a fun write and the words jist came out
    Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
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This was absolutely fantastic Christine and because you were willing and be brave enough to share both your poem and your notes it is deserving of a six if I could do more I would. Most people think of astral travelling as hocus pocus, but it is very real and some can become quiet skilled at it. Very well done, thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Ary, Thank you oh so much for your faith in me and understanding this unusual phenonoma I cannot explain it but it was a terrific experience and your wonderful review has made it a worthwhile share Many Cheers and bright travels Christine
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Ary, Thank you oh so much for your faith in me and understanding this unusual phenonoma I cannot explain it but it was a terrific experience and your wonderful review has made it a worthwhile share Many Cheers and bright travels Christine
reply by aryr on 20-Apr-2018
    You are so welcome Christine, I've been doing it since I was 7 (smile).
Comment from royowen
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I had the same sensations Christine, but more along the daylight variety, it was escaping people that could harm me, so I floated above the earth, but out of reach. You wrote this beautifully my friend. Wonderfull expressed with great imagery, great language, lyrical and smooth flow, a very interesting post. Written abcb rhyming and 8686 quatrains, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Roy. Thank you So much and I have had a couple of day time experiences also unexplainable but I just accept these things wothout trying to read too much into them . I can often predict an event just before it happens and seem to have connections with others that are to jard to fathom out. Maybe our creative natures are more advanced and open to different things. I enjoyed this write and your review is undersatnding Cheers Christine Hi to Elaine
reply by royowen on 20-Apr-2018
    Well done Christine
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned. You used very good words and lovely art work. I have never experienced this at all, but I do know that with God all things are possible! Thanks for sharing! Teri

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Teri, Thanks for resding this poem and I cannot explain it either except to say it was a memorable experience So who knows .I appreciate your time and comments Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Christine. This is great. Hello, fellow traveler. I think you will find you have more company on tripping out like this in your dreams than you might expect. What a thrill it is. Loved your poem. You've described it perfectly and I enjoyed your author's note. Great job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Marilyn, Thanks for your review and wouldn't it be great to meet up one night during our travels. Also I believe every connection is meant to be and this site is our destiny to also meet each other. Cheers my friend Christine
reply by BeasPeas on 20-Apr-2018
    Hi Christine. Maybe the astral traveling is where the old song, "I'll See You In My Dreams" came from. Yes destiny brings us together in one fashion or another. Hugs, Marilyn