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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is such a romantic story! Christine you brought a tear to my eye, congratulations! How wonderful that ran off and got married like that! A love bond in your heart. Your Acrostic is beautiful, have a wonderful day! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Dolly, Thank you and no tears now we were a bit of a rebel when we eloped and ai would do it again LOL my daughter akatie however had a huge wedding and so I got to buy her dress for her. I enjoy acrostics and this was a bit special Cheers Christinexx
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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Chrissy awesome and ingenious of a wonderful acronym for the word anniversary what you really was impressed by. And then you poured out every meaningful detail of what you experirnced over the years and what the anniversary means to you. I love it. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Mary, Thank you and yes it has been a long time 44 years today. still we celebrated with a nice dinner at a good restaurant. I enjoyed writing this and glad you loved it Cheers Christine
reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 17-Apr-2018
    Cheers back at you and a toast to many more happy, delightful, romantic, intimate and HEALTHY years of life together!
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a wonderfully written acrostic and very romantic. It is nice to see a rhyming acrostic. This is a great anniversary present.

Congratulations on being married for so long.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi dragonpoet, Thank you for your review and it was fun to write I quite like acrostics and yes 44 years not a bad effort LOL cheers Christine
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Apr-2018
    Don't mention it, Christine.

    Joan
Comment from Harry Smith
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Excellent picture to compliment this outstandingly written poem that is full of emotions and has lots and lots of imagery. Excellent job.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Harry, Thank you for your review and I enjoyed reminiscing about our 44 years I have a good man and wonderful family Lucky girl Cheers Christine
Comment from Pamusart
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Well you have us beat. I am my husband's second wife and we have been together for 39 years. When I saw the date you got married, I flashed to my parents who married April 17, 1950 and divorced 17 years later. Congratulations. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Pam Thank you and yes a long time but still together we were only 9 months courting before we married so not bad hey LOL. we have had a good life and enjoy each others company. Cheers Christine
Comment from karenina
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Happy 40th! Amazing accomplishment that! Serms nowadays some couples hop off at the first bump in the road! Love is patient..
it outlasts the storms. Blessings and congratulations!
Karenina



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 Comment Written 17-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
    Hi Karenina, Thank you for you review and yes marriage is like a stormy ride at times it's not jumping ship that counts and we have weathered the storms and survived this long 44 years and still going strong. Many Cheers to you Christine
reply by karenina on 18-Apr-2018
    "Our doubts are traitors,
    And make us lose the good we oft might win By fearing to attempt."--Shakespeare