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Comment from Katya
Oh, this is great! Just that moment of loving to be sleeping, and then deciding to get up--your poem really takes me though it. I love the picture, too. and I love your bringing the dog into it.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Oh, this is great! Just that moment of loving to be sleeping, and then deciding to get up--your poem really takes me though it. I love the picture, too. and I love your bringing the dog into it.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Hi Katya, Thank you and yes it is easy to have that extra 5 minutes especially on a cold morning tempting to just snuggle nack under a warm doona. LOL Speaking of dogs Mine need a walk So I must get up Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
Very well done Christine and rather enjoyable. It represented the honesty of the situation. Being tired, wanting to sleep late or even have a nap, yet confronted with the challenge and the drive to meet commitments. It also prompted encouragement. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Very well done Christine and rather enjoyable. It represented the honesty of the situation. Being tired, wanting to sleep late or even have a nap, yet confronted with the challenge and the drive to meet commitments. It also prompted encouragement. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Hi Ary, Thank you and yes it is tempting on a cold morning to stay longer. I sometimes do FS writing and reviews and replies before I get out of bed and sometimes I can spend a few hours doing so and the time just goes LOL Cheers Christine
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Ahaaa, welcome to my word Christine, its nice to be lazy from time to time, you are so welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Well done rhyming quatrains, Christine. Hope you really did get a deep and refreshing sleep!
"I've stayed in bed to long today" (too)
"My minds just put me to the test" (mind's)
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Well done rhyming quatrains, Christine. Hope you really did get a deep and refreshing sleep!
"I've stayed in bed to long today" (too)
"My minds just put me to the test" (mind's)
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Hi lyenochka, Thank you so much for reading my Lazy bones and I have fixed those spags must need more sleep LOL .Asxalways aprreciate you review and help Cheers Christine
Comment from Bill Schott
This NAPOWRIMO poem, Lazy Bones, finds you talking about my life today as well. With freezing drizzle causing cancellations everywhere, we stayed in bed until ten. Then, sat in lounge chairs to two p.m.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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This NAPOWRIMO poem, Lazy Bones, finds you talking about my life today as well. With freezing drizzle causing cancellations everywhere, we stayed in bed until ten. Then, sat in lounge chairs to two p.m.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2018
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Hi Bill, Thank you and I am sure I speak about many lives LOL it is easy to want to stay when the weather is cold. Nana naps or SCANS: Senior Citizens Afternoon Naps are the go also in the afternoon Ha Ha. Cheers Christine