Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hooray you did it! And you used clever and creative Xerox and Zigzagging to make use of those tricky alphabet letters. I like the easy conversational nature of the poem.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018

Hi Helen Thanks for your review It was fun to do this challenge and I hope ai did it justice Cheers Christine

Comment from Susan B. Lamphier

Excellent

Oh my! That took some doing! Good job! The graphic is absolutely spot on, although I had to look at it a bit because of the impossible Escher graphic (or was it intentionally impossible, considering the effort to complete the poem perfectly?) You've done a terrific job. Well done!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Susan Thank you for reaing through my Alphabet These are fun and often the last few X amd Z havent much choice but I thonk I managed it This iimage is often
used for words But i fitted this i hope Cheers Christine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written alphabet poem from A - Z. A thought out plan to write the poem using each letter of the alphabet with lines and ideas flowing from the one to the next.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Sandra Thank you for reading this one I am a little behind in my posts as I have been away still am but will make up when ai get home I am sitting in the early morning sun outside and it is lovely may gove me inspitration Cheers Christine

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Exceptional

Hi Chrissy, very well done. Quite an ambitious piece considering it is just one of thirty. Some are just doing quite short pieces. Cleverly composed and I applaud you with the letter X - a difficult one and you have used it so appropriately. It deserves a 6 - every line made sense. Good luck with the rest of the month. Warm regards Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Dorothy Oh Thank you so much and sorry for delay in replying I have had a busy weekend and now quite behind in posts and replies so trying to get them done now You six stars are lovely and I appreciate your generosity and lovely support Cheers Christine

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was totally amazing Christine. What a challenge to cover each letter of the alphabet in perfect order. You did so fantastic with this one, what more can I say other than very well done and very much enjoyed.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Ary Thank you so much and it was fun to write and glad you enjoyed readin it have a great day Cheers Christine

reply by aryr on 08-Apr-2018

You are most welcome Christine.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Chrissy,

We're only at day 5, it feels like forever lol! I missed reading and reviewing yesterday because Molly spent the day with me. I hope to catch up today, and promote my day six poem.

I like your alphabet poem :) It all skips along nicely. I always run into trouble with x and z, but I see you handled them like a pro. Well done.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Joy Thanls so much and I toom behond as I have been away still am and trying to catch up so sorry for delayed reply
yes x and z are hard ones but hopefully made it this time Cheers Christine

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Christine. I enjoyed reading your AbeCdarian (I think this form is called) using every letter of the alphabet. Once we get past those pesky letters we are home free. I like how you have questioned yourself throughout and your choices for Q-X-Y-Z. Good job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Marilyn Thanks and yes I knwew there was a name for this style I will try and remember for the next oneLOL
I am behind inposts and replies so teyong to catch up Ha Ha using my I phoneand keep tapping the wrong bloody letters and have to then delete them and go back so it takes me forever to get it right I need to get busy when I get home Away at my sons Cheers Christine

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Very cleverly written. Suggestions and hugs, Trisha

C line change to " consider"

K line take out "that"

U line take out "I'm"

To me it flows easier

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Trisha Thanks for yourre iew and suggestions I have taken you advice on a couple Bit left that on as I needed a seven sylable line for that one it is 7.6. .syllable meter But liked your other ones Cheers muchly Christine

reply by Bucketlist on 09-Apr-2018

Welcome muchly!,

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Is there an alphabet challenge for which you submitted this? It is clever and cute. Not sure I would want to spend the time. But, if I had to write one per day.,,, I can't promote that many. Good job. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Hi Pam Thank you for ypur review and apologies for delayed reply It was a fun self challenge and I am going to try a different style for every poem But I am behind as I have been very busy the and few days and no time to write or reply Back on track nearlyCheers Christine