Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

Great photo as it really sets up the poem. Truth be told I needed to go back to the image and was more than delighted. Good luck in the contest, I'm sure it will fair well!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

excellent. especially the alliteration. humor and rhyme.
the perfect formula for a thirty syl. poem. good luck in the contest.
.......meeshu

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018

Comment from Sherman541

Exceptional

Perfect Picture for a perfect short poetry of 30 syllables. I truly enjoyed and liked the poem, it was fun. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

Comment from Blue Hendrix

Excellent

Good job! Nicely done I really enjoyed the picture you have placed in my mind with your perfectly placed word choices. Great entry for this contest as well.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 30 Syllable writing prompt.
Your fish story is a good one.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

No credit for the painting? I was wondering who created it? Was it you? This is a good entry for the contest. You have to have the image for the poem to make sense. Interesting concept. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018