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Daily poems for April 2018

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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Well Chrissy, it's now the first of April here. Happy Easter. Great poem and Happy Birthday to your handsome son - he really is WOW! My daughter was due on lst April but came on 31 March. She's always been a bit awkward LOL. But lovely really. LOL.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ADAM - Belated!

Warm regards Chrissy - Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Hi Dorothy, Thanks for your review and birthday wishes to my gorgeous son a bit good looking he is remonds me of my Father. I remember coming into Labour on the 1st and hearing my motherinlaw saying you can't have the baby today on April Fools day well news for her I wasn't waiting around for the 2nd LOL . We enjoyed celebrating with him and it was fun to get an April fools joke on him too Ha Ha he did se the funny side though. Cheers Christinexx
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the National Poetry Month writing prompt.
Your April Fool Poem is a lovely kick off for the poetry month, and a nice tribute to your son.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Hi Sharon, This is my first for April1st ( it is not the 1st in America yet ) so I have written 2 poems one for the southern Hemisphere and one for the northern hemisphere April 1sts LOl confused I am Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A great tribute to your son on the 1st April and this is a happy picture of the two of you, happy memories in the bank here, have a great day, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Hi Dolly, Thanks so mich and we did have a great day despite the 'spider' LOL Adam was pleased with this poem written for him and hes a great memory to store away Cheers Christine
Comment from damommy
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Such a lovely picture of you both. I bet he gets a lot of jokes on his birthday. The spider joke had me laughing. Something like my sons would play on me. lol.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
    Hi Yvonne, Yes it worked a treat it is usually him doing the joke but I was quicker today LOL It was great to catch up and help him celebrate his 34 th birthday Thanks for reading this Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
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No fair, Christine! You are a day ahead of us slow pokes in the Northern Hemisphere. That said, congratulations to you for joining the NaPo. A poem a day keeps writers block away, or so I'm told.

Gorgeous photograph and a lovely poem to get you off to the start of an exciting month.

Gloria

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Hi Gloria, Thank you and I am not sure if this will count I have one for tomorrow your 1st April LOL but as it is here the 1st and my sons birthday and April fools day I thought I could combine the two he did jump when I mentioned Spider and me and his fiancée did laugh out loud. It will be fun to do the challenge Cheer to you Christine
Comment from lyenochka
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How fun to have a special day for your birthday. I hope he didn't suffer too many jokes on his birthday! I'm sure he must have a great sense of humor. Fun poem and great picture of both of you!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Hi lyenochka. Yes it was fun to catch him out he is usually the one to do the practical jokes but I got in first LOL and yes he did see the funny side. Being born on 1st April always brings some extra fun Thanks for reading my poem and as always your support is lovely to me Cheers Christine
Comment from Michael Steinert
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This was exceptionally beautiful. Please take all 6. I'm glad you are still so close to your son even as he gets older. The photograph was also tremendous

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Oh Michael Thank you so much What a lovely surprise to receive you lovely words and six stars. Yes I am very close to all my three children and we share a very special bond I am so proud of them all and we were able to celebrate with Adam today. I am so pleased you enjoyed this and feel humbled by you review Many Cheers Christine
Comment from Bill Schott
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So this neat poem, April Fool, is a great way of wishing your son a Happy Birthday. I guess he ought to be the trickster since he is THE April Fool (respectfully).

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Hi Bill. Thanks very much for your review and ye he is often the trickster April Fools day or not LOL but it was fun to get one up on him this morning but he is my April Fool in the most respectful way/ Many Cheers to you Bill Christine
Comment from l.raven
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HI Chrissy, HAPPY BIRTHDAY to your son...I don't think I would want to be born on April Fools...people always playing jokes on me...LOL...I love your poem...very well written...and your picture is priceless...he is very handsome...and you very pretty...may you and your family have a Blessed Easter Sunday...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Hi Linda, Thank you so much and Yes it was interesting trying to tell people I had a baby on 1st April until they realized I was serious even my mother in law said" You cant have him today" and I said too bad when he wants to arrive that is OK by me LOL I wasn't hanging around until the second ha ha . He is gorgeous and we love him to bits. Happy Easter to you and your family also Cheers Christinexxx
reply by l.raven on 31-Mar-2018
    my daughter was born November the 1st...was in labor trick or tricking Oct 31st with my 2 year old son...LOL...they come when they are ready...you are always so very welcome...love xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
    Yes they certainly do and what a bonus
reply by l.raven on 01-Apr-2018
    LOL...smiling...xxoo love
Comment from Artasylum
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I must my back Chrisy710... first What a ver Handsome son you have reared... But, April 1... I don't know he probably knows every joke ever done. Loved the poem and HAPPY BIRTHDAY he who shall remain nameless. I'm watching you!

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Hi Artasylum. Thank you very much for reading my poem to my gorgeous son Adam I did laugh though when I caught him out this morning with the old spider joke and he fell for it LOL . So one to Mum today ha ha. Keep watching I have month of daily poems over April . Cheers Christine