Things Left Unsaid
If only I could undo that moment...27 total reviews
Comment from jdrhye
Well done....what a powerful 10 words....they paint a image of the before, middle and ending. The words spell out the emotions that become so powerful they overwhelm and over shadow the deepest part that hides regret, hope, etc.
Congrats!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Well done....what a powerful 10 words....they paint a image of the before, middle and ending. The words spell out the emotions that become so powerful they overwhelm and over shadow the deepest part that hides regret, hope, etc.
Congrats!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Your words are so true. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from Boogienights
Congratulations on winning the contest, you deserve it. I was also in the contest with my impossible dream.I think everyone would love to undo something in their life if it was possible.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Congratulations on winning the contest, you deserve it. I was also in the contest with my impossible dream.I think everyone would love to undo something in their life if it was possible.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. It was a great contest. Take care my friend...Bill
Comment from jenintorre
Hi Bill
This is such a poignant sentence. I can so relate to it. I truly wish I had said it many years ago. I am so pleased you won the contest. Congratulations. You had my vote.
Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill
This is such a poignant sentence. I can so relate to it. I truly wish I had said it many years ago. I am so pleased you won the contest. Congratulations. You had my vote.
Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much, Jen, for your wonderful review and rating. I truly appreciate it. So many of us have experienced this situation. However, I was one of the lucky ones. I got that second chance and took advantage of it. My wife and I have been together for 50 years this past November. And, I thank God every day for such a loving woman for my wife. I hope and pray that your life is blessed in many ways, Jen. Take care of yourself...Bill
Comment from Kerry Foley
Congratulations on your win, my friend. This impossible dream monostitch made an awesome statement. Nice one. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Congratulations on your win, my friend. This impossible dream monostitch made an awesome statement. Nice one. ~Kerry
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks again, Kerry, for your excellent review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Take care...Bill
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My pleasure, Bill.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Cedar,
An excellent monostich. Congratulations on your winning entry! Your message speaks volumes of truth. Very wise words. I always shared with my students that if people communicated freely and openly so many of the world's problems would be eliminated. Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Hello Cedar,
An excellent monostich. Congratulations on your winning entry! Your message speaks volumes of truth. Very wise words. I always shared with my students that if people communicated freely and openly so many of the world's problems would be eliminated. Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Diane, for your thoughtful review, I appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from TPAC
An endearing thought, it made me wonder how one allowed the parting, as its given revelation the ideal of separation was wrong. The view defining the monkey hand in jar holding candy, not able to pull it out.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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An endearing thought, it made me wonder how one allowed the parting, as its given revelation the ideal of separation was wrong. The view defining the monkey hand in jar holding candy, not able to pull it out.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day...Bill
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
So much meaning in so few words. There is no guesswork as to the message you're trying to convey. Those what if moments will get you every time, sometimes later than sooner. I enjoyed this well written with few words work.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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So much meaning in so few words. There is no guesswork as to the message you're trying to convey. Those what if moments will get you every time, sometimes later than sooner. I enjoyed this well written with few words work.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks again, Jeffrey, for your kind words. I totally agree with you. Take care...Bill
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Monostitch' writing prompt.
Your story is well told in so few words.
The win is well deserved. Congratulations.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Monostitch' writing prompt.
Your story is well told in so few words.
The win is well deserved. Congratulations.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Sharon, for your excellent review. I appreciate it. Take care...Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Monostich. We say a lot of things that sometimes don't have any meaning. We hold back to say the things that are important and realize it too late. Once again Congratulations for winning the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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A very well-written Monostich. We say a lot of things that sometimes don't have any meaning. We hold back to say the things that are important and realize it too late. Once again Congratulations for winning the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Sandra, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I totally agree with you, many times we wait too late to say what's in our heart's. Thanks, my friend...Bill
Comment from F. Wehr3
Nicely done! That's definitely something that can't be undone. I didn't vote in this poetry contest, but I thought you did a great job. Congrats on your win!
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Nicely done! That's definitely something that can't be undone. I didn't vote in this poetry contest, but I thought you did a great job. Congrats on your win!
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you, Russell, for your kind words and excellent review, I appreciate it very much. Have a great day my friend...Bill
