Comment from
Barb Hensongispsaca
Sounds like me with my first husband. OH well that is for another day.lol
Very well done acrostic with messages that need to be heard but no one listens to.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
LOL the last line, you mean? Thanks for the kind words :) Craig
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Well your poem is less than optimistic? But I suppose there is some sarcasm here in your words, I love that word, Tapleyism! Must commit that to memory. Of course Dickens was responsible for Dickensian which means 'in Dickens times' and usually referred to something antiquated, old fashioned and of no use. In Victorian times people had a lot of optimism, as you say in the most appalling conditions too. If only we could learn from this, great work as always, a well thought out Acrostic and it's a pity it is not in a contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
I was more pointing to the irrational (well, in my opinion) optimism we seem to have that we can keep doing whatever we like to the planet and everything will somehow magically be ok :) Thanks for the kind and supportive comments, Dolly - much appreciated. Cheers, Craig