Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Craig, This is a very well written story in a poem. You told how mean Henry the 8th was and so forth. You used very good descriptive wording and how the first lottery came to be. Very interesting and good. I enjoyed reading it my friend. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018

Thanks so much, Teri. I'm glad you liked it :) Craig

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A clever little lady you might say and she was cunning and wise and learned so much from her father and decided not to share her crown with any man! I loved your rhymes and flow and you had a great message here about a great queen, loved it! Love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018

Thanks for the lovely review, Dolly. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

I never heard that Queen Elizabeth had a lottery. It seems something she might do.
I don't think many of Henry VIII wived had to think of commerce. That was Henry's job as king. But I like the pun with no head for she was beheaded.

Keep writing

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018

Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated. Craig

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Jan-2018

Don't mention it, Craig.

Joan