Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

The flow of your words suited the subject of tap dancing, I loved how when read it is almost like hearing metal on boards.
A wonderful, enjoyable read.
Have a great day

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks very much, YNWA. Glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes, Tony

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

I am reminded of the ancient musicals with Ginger rogers and it makes me wonder if you were watching an old black and white as you wrote this down? I liked Dancing on the ceiling"/ Astair's routine when he actually did dance up walls and flipped off the ceiling. I imagine the circular movement could be a routine fora pantoum/

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks very much, Frierajac. Glad you enjoyed it! It's a long time since I last saw any of these old movies, but they do stick in the mind, don't they? Best wishes, Tony

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

How about a highly modified pantoum. Whatever ou call it It works and I enjoyed it very much. A very creative 'whatever, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks very much, Debbie. Glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes, Tony

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I like this and Think I would enjoy learning free verse as I am trying to understand types of poetry and this one seems to give freedom of thought I also enjoyed your notes thank you****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks very much, Kahpot. Glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

Experimentation is what makes the wheels of change go round and round friend, they can clack, clackety, clack as much and as long they want, onward and upwards friend, onward and upwards. Well done!!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks very much, Hitch. Glad you enjoyed it! Best wishes, Tony

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Tony. I must admit for the layman like me who is no expert at all on Pontoons or free verse (LOL) it is all just fun poetry to me. Jim is quite thr expert on this stuff isn't he? Well, I love the rhythm of the whole thing no matter what:

"The whirring in my brain becomes
a tap-dance into heaven,
for my dream is driven by steam!"

Bless you, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks, Bob. I appreciate your review. Tony

Comment from estory

Exceptional

I loved the tap dancing rhythm you created in this piece, all the repetitions that seemed to capture a Fred Astaire scene that is stuck on pause. We are mesmerized by the music here, hypnotized by it, and we can't seem to break free from its spell. this seems like a true minimalist piece where the music of the language comes from repeating phrases and words, rather than rhyme and iambic pentameter. estory

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks very much for your kind comments and six stars, estory. Very much appreciated. Tony

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Clack clackety clack . . . Yes the tap dancers metal studs hitting a wooden floor, great sounds and I used to love Fred Astaire. I used to tap dance when I was younger and was in a few shows. 'Tap ball change' and 'toe heel taps', goes well with clackety clack! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks, Dolly. Glad you enjoyed the rhythm of this one. Tony

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Well whatever you want to call this, it is an interesting read as, clickety clack you tap dance into heaven. For me, it's more a free verse with repeating lines, and I always like repeated lines.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks, Valda. I appreciate your review and comments. Tony

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

Who cares about the form/style when the verse is so wonderfully composed and enjoyable to read; great flow; good poem for all ages;thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017

Thanks, ameen786. I appreciate your review and comments. Tony