The Easy Way
There is more than one way to hide eggs38 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
And this was nicely, fun, to read. The picture set off the imagination to a premium. Nicely thought of.
Good luck with the write.
My best wishes.
RG
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And this was nicely, fun, to read. The picture set off the imagination to a premium. Nicely thought of.
Good luck with the write.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from Aiona
Heh! The incredibly short poem paints a funny picture. It nade me smile, and it fits the five-seven-five format required of the contest.
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Heh! The incredibly short poem paints a funny picture. It nade me smile, and it fits the five-seven-five format required of the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Your funny 5/7/5 lines connect smoothly have concrete images and your presentation is very funny and attractive. Good job!
Good luck in the contest.
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Hello, my friend,
Your funny 5/7/5 lines connect smoothly have concrete images and your presentation is very funny and attractive. Good job!
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
Comment from Dawn Munro
That's a pretty rough trip for a chicken. (HAhahahahaha!) What a funny poem - perfect for this prompt! I hope it wins. Some bunny has Easter in mind... Yum. Chocolate goodies and jelly beans...(Best of luck in the contest with this adorable poem.)
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That's a pretty rough trip for a chicken. (HAhahahahaha!) What a funny poem - perfect for this prompt! I hope it wins. Some bunny has Easter in mind... Yum. Chocolate goodies and jelly beans...(Best of luck in the contest with this adorable poem.)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from pome lover
well, you did it.
Made me smile.
Clever and cute.
And original!
Kids would get a laugh out of it.
good job.
pome lover
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well, you did it.
Made me smile.
Clever and cute.
And original!
Kids would get a laugh out of it.
good job.
pome lover
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from NHazelwood
Creative use of onomatopoeia in the line "Drop squawk drop squawk drop". The author has a very whimsical and sharply detailed drawing to encapsulate the theme of the poem. Well written!
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Creative use of onomatopoeia in the line "Drop squawk drop squawk drop". The author has a very whimsical and sharply detailed drawing to encapsulate the theme of the poem. Well written!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from Rhonni
This is absolutely adorable and definitely brought a smile to my face. Now that's a creative thought on how to hide eggs, for sure. Very fun poem and cute picture too. Good luck in the contest.
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This is absolutely adorable and definitely brought a smile to my face. Now that's a creative thought on how to hide eggs, for sure. Very fun poem and cute picture too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from mermaids
This is a very intelligent Easter Bunny. This is a unique way to deliver and hide the Easter eggs. Excellent use of words and a fun poem about Easter. I like how the chicken is helping the Easter bunny.
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This is a very intelligent Easter Bunny. This is a unique way to deliver and hide the Easter eggs. Excellent use of words and a fun poem about Easter. I like how the chicken is helping the Easter bunny.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I enjoyed the humour in this poem you have done really well the art choice matches it well good luck in the contest regards Jill
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Yes I enjoyed the humour in this poem you have done really well the art choice matches it well good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
Comment from Hitcher
Ha, ha, I'd always suspected that that was actually the case when it came to how those delicious chocolate eggs were delivered. A cool little poem for the contest, good luck!
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Ha, ha, I'd always suspected that that was actually the case when it came to how those delicious chocolate eggs were delivered. A cool little poem for the contest, good luck!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
