Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading. Well composed and rhymed. Good content, too. I particularly like:
"I remember that heart-stopping look in your eye,
it penetrated into mine, I felt I would die,
when I say these three words, "I love you"
always remember dear they are only for you."
Much luck in the contest, Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you so much Marilyn, I really appreciate your excellent review on my valentine poem.

Mary

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

This is a nice valentine love poem for your husband, good rhyming with a good meter. reads and flows well. good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks William, I really appreciate your excellent review.
Mary

Comment from suep

Excellent

A sweet poem expressing your love for your husband and a good entry for the contest. Nice rhyming. I especially enjoyed 'without you in my life, I would be incomplete.' I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks suep for a wonderful review on my valentine poem, I really appreciate it. Mary

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A beautiful tribute to your loved one and the love you share together, well chosen rhyming words with great sentiments, good luck with the competition, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you Dolly for your excellent review and kind comments. Mary

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

I love the painting and the lines are dreamy and sweet. This a fitting tribute to Valentines and the lovers out there. The poem speaks volume about an undying love and the passion of true love. God bless. Susan

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks you so much for an excellent review and kind remarks I really appreciate it. Mary

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written love and Valentine's poem. A lifelong commitment to a loving spouse is precious. Still madly in love after many years with each other is true love.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks Sandra, for your excellent review. Mary

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

A lovely and romantic poem filled with great emotion and passion.
Expressed through eyes of love with great tenderness.
Well written and a joy to read.
Michael

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you so much for the genuine review and excellent rating. Mary

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Love is definitely in the air because this poem exudes romance and gratitude. Through your lovely well-crafted poem, I got to know the gentleness of your husband. I am sure he will hold this poem of endearing sentiments dear to this heart.

It seems as if you are going to have a good Valentine's Day. Good for you!

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thanks My poetic friend, for your excellent review. much appreciated. Mary

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A very well written poem with good use of rhyme/proximate rhyme. Very sweet and a poem any lover would like to receive. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you DEbbie, I am grateful for your wonderful review. Mary

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Lovely, indeed, a true valentine poem, as it has the crème of celebration of the day, the sensational and emotional state of mind is keenly expressed in a love voice, free flow of thoughts studded with visual imagery to expose the sensible key words, I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Hi, I appreciate your excellent review and your great comments. Mary