Custer's Last Stand
narrative poem about event June 25/187614 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
An excellent historical poem about the battle of Little Big Horn. You made a wonderful tribute to the people who died that day. A great story in poetic form, and you chose a historical theme.
Great luck in the contest,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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An excellent historical poem about the battle of Little Big Horn. You made a wonderful tribute to the people who died that day. A great story in poetic form, and you chose a historical theme.
Great luck in the contest,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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I' delighted you enjoyed my historical narrative. I appreciate the kind praise and best wishes.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Service Poem notwithstanding, I happen to be a big fan of poetry such as yours that features an impeccable rhythm, excellent internal rhyme and tells a story about an event that took place in our nation's storied history.
Custer's Last Stand at Little Bighorn was an oft-told tale when I was a young lad, and as you've stated here, it was always romanticized to sound like some sort of moral victory.
In reality, nothing could be further from the truth I later discovered.
The rhythm you've managed to create here is reminiscent of the beating of horse hooves, en masse, or perhaps it is the beating of tribal Souix Indian war drums I'm detecting.
In any event, this is exceptional poetry and I truly wish you the very best of luck in the outcome of the judging for this contest.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Service Poem notwithstanding, I happen to be a big fan of poetry such as yours that features an impeccable rhythm, excellent internal rhyme and tells a story about an event that took place in our nation's storied history.
Custer's Last Stand at Little Bighorn was an oft-told tale when I was a young lad, and as you've stated here, it was always romanticized to sound like some sort of moral victory.
In reality, nothing could be further from the truth I later discovered.
The rhythm you've managed to create here is reminiscent of the beating of horse hooves, en masse, or perhaps it is the beating of tribal Souix Indian war drums I'm detecting.
In any event, this is exceptional poetry and I truly wish you the very best of luck in the outcome of the judging for this contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Thank you so much, Dean, for your wonderful reception of this poem and the superlative rating. I am truly honored you enjoyed my using Service's style as you often do yourself. Again, many thanks.
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The pleasure was all mine.
You are more than welcome.
~Dean
Comment from damommy
Exceptionally well written. Tells the story so well and so clearly.
I love Robert Service. I have the entire collection of his works.
Good rhythm, internal rhyme, and flow. Couldn't be better. A true winner. 8-)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Exceptionally well written. Tells the story so well and so clearly.
I love Robert Service. I have the entire collection of his works.
Good rhythm, internal rhyme, and flow. Couldn't be better. A true winner. 8-)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Wow! I am delighted to know someone still reads Service AND collects his works. I truly appreciate your wonderful response to this poem and those six bright stars. Thank you very much.
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I felt the same when I saw you mention his name. I only know one other person who is a fan of his. I don't know why he's not more popular. He's is such a great writer.
When the contest is over, you must let me know who you are. 8-)
Yvonne
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I will be more than delighted to let you know.
Comment from mbroyles2
A legendary story told in the form of a poem.
I like the rhymes and the pace was fantastic.
The 7th calvary was terribly out manned and the Indians took advantage.
Good job!
Michael
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A legendary story told in the form of a poem.
I like the rhymes and the pace was fantastic.
The 7th calvary was terribly out manned and the Indians took advantage.
Good job!
Michael
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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I am delighted you enjoyed the story in poetic form. Thank you so much for sharing.