Jump
1-6-1 form60 total reviews
Comment from ronnie k
LOL, Goofy is such a perfect character to headline this poem, JUMP.....stump.....thump puts everything in perfect laugh order LOL
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LOL, Goofy is such a perfect character to headline this poem, JUMP.....stump.....thump puts everything in perfect laugh order LOL
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Hi Ronnie, he is one of my favorite characters...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from royowen
It's a funny thing but thump and jump, rhyme with chump and Trump. No association is there? Well done, a really great entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest, I love the Goofy cartoon artwork, good luck, blessings, Roy
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It's a funny thing but thump and jump, rhyme with chump and Trump. No association is there? Well done, a really great entry in this 1/6/1 poetry contest, I love the Goofy cartoon artwork, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Roy, Goofy is one of my favorite...thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...thank you for the good luck...and blessing to you as well...xxoo
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Well done
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thank you...xxoo
Comment from robyn corum
The picture of Goofy is perfect for this post. *smile* And I can hear him saying in that distant, far-away voice, 'I'm okay!'. heehee A fun one. Thanks for sharing and good luck!
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The picture of Goofy is perfect for this post. *smile* And I can hear him saying in that distant, far-away voice, 'I'm okay!'. heehee A fun one. Thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Robyn, Goofy is one of my favorites....thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...so glad you are ok...LOL...
Comment from barleygirl
Very nice visual to go with your perfectly-worded short poem that tells a whole story with natural-sounding rhyming. Good luck in the contest.
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Very nice visual to go with your perfectly-worded short poem that tells a whole story with natural-sounding rhyming. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Girl, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...thank you for the good luck...xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and presentation.
-Format is good.
-I like how line two relates
to both of your words.
-Just like Goofy--he jumps
but it just doesn't work out!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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-Good image and presentation.
-Format is good.
-I like how line two relates
to both of your words.
-Just like Goofy--he jumps
but it just doesn't work out!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Pam, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...I love Goofy...and thank for all the luck...xxoo
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You are very welcome. I did like your poem and Goofy. You are also welcome for all the luck!
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thank you...smiling...xxoo
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A good thing to do 🙂
Comment from rspoet
This is very good, humorous entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 1-6-1
and the three required rhymes
Many a person has landed with a thump
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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This is very good, humorous entry for the contest
with exact syllables at 1-6-1
and the three required rhymes
Many a person has landed with a thump
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Robert, yes they have...Goofy just happens to be one of my favorite...thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from Cedar
Hello my friend...This is funny and has a great picture to go along with your perfect rhyming words. I think it's going to do real well in the contest. It got my vote. Take care. Bill
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Hello my friend...This is funny and has a great picture to go along with your perfect rhyming words. I think it's going to do real well in the contest. It got my vote. Take care. Bill
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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HI Bill, thank you so very much my friend...I am so glad you like it...I hope you are doing well...take care too...xxoo
Comment from Pantygynt
How did you manage to resist the name of today's man of the moment that would have rhymed so well in here? Possibly because you posted it yersterday I suppose.
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How did you manage to resist the name of today's man of the moment that would have rhymed so well in here? Possibly because you posted it yersterday I suppose.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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you got it....thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! That is great! I really liked that and the picture you've chosen. Well done. Mind you, changing stump to Trump would have been good too, lol! Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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LOL! That is great! I really liked that and the picture you've chosen. Well done. Mind you, changing stump to Trump would have been good too, lol! Good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
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Hi Sandra, thank you so very much....I am so glad you like it...xxoo
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the artwork at first
Than I read you cute poem
I thought is was a nice play on words.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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You captured my attention from the artwork at first
Than I read you cute poem
I thought is was a nice play on words.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2016
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Hi Misscookie, thank you so very much.....I am so glad you like it...xxoo
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Good day to you.
You're very welcome. peace God be with you.
Cookie
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peace and god be with you as well...xxoo
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Thank you, have a nice week end.
Cookie