Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Freedom for education"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from alan_lehrer
Very good poem and quite a descriptive artwork that sets it off of Malala
that women in the artwork. Perhaps another sentence about her before
that last line appears could have been written.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Very good poem and quite a descriptive artwork that sets it off of Malala
that women in the artwork. Perhaps another sentence about her before
that last line appears could have been written.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Thanks for your rating of 5 for my entry into the acrostic contest Freedom. When you say another line would be advisable, you do know on can only use the word illustrated for the acrostic.
I appreciate you review.
Comment from ronnie k
Thank you for this poem, life here is not so bad and I for one really look outside of it to realize, things are great here, I will make it my business to broaden my horizon's
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Thank you for this poem, life here is not so bad and I for one really look outside of it to realize, things are great here, I will make it my business to broaden my horizon's
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Thanks ronnie for an excellent review.
Comment from RYME4U
This is an excellent tribute to a very brave young lady. You have managed to tell her whole story in this acrostic. The way you have presented this is very well done, also. Good luck in contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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This is an excellent tribute to a very brave young lady. You have managed to tell her whole story in this acrostic. The way you have presented this is very well done, also. Good luck in contest.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the excellent review, much appreciated.
Comment from William Ross
Nicely done on the acrostic for freedom, and using this young lady was just great. She fought for what she wanted and believed in. Thanks for the share and have a great day.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Nicely done on the acrostic for freedom, and using this young lady was just great. She fought for what she wanted and believed in. Thanks for the share and have a great day.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Thanks William for your encouraging review
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the poem is a rundown of exploits of Malala vis-a-vis
propagating the rights of the
girl-child in acquiring education.The work thrives on a propaganda texture.Excellent work!Bravo!
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The objective correlative of the poem is a rundown of exploits of Malala vis-a-vis
propagating the rights of the
girl-child in acquiring education.The work thrives on a propaganda texture.Excellent work!Bravo!
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016
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Thanks for your excellent review and welcome comments.
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Remain Blessed!