Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Congratulations on the win!
You have given sage advice in this well written Naani poem.
Tomorrow is promised to no one so we need to cherish each other and the time we have together.

Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016

Thank you Janet for your excellent review, I appreciate your comments. Have a great day my friend. Bill

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

How right you are! We should always be aware that death can take any of us or our loved ones, without notice. Peace should be applied, and kept alive. A very nice poem.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you Roosty for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I would also like to wish a belated welcome to the site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay. If I can be of any help, please let me know. Bill

reply by RoostyNester on 27-Sep-2016

Thanks for the welcome. There is so much to learn. But little by little, I might get there. haha I have really enjoyed all the members of FanStory. If I need help, I might take you up on it. Thanks for the offer. God Bless!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written naani. We never know when we see someone we love for the last time. Congratulations on winning the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you Sandra for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very nicely done on the naani and congrarts on the first place win. yes we should cherish every moment with out loved ones. no one knows when it will end. have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you Bill for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Bill

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Cedar, Congratulations on your win and these words are so true well constructed Naani with a complimentary image. overall well done Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you Christine for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Congratulations on your win with this. So true. I had 2 heart attacks last November, and just that quickly, almost lost everyone. A great Naani contest winner! Blessings...

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you Irish for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Sorry to hear about your heart attacks, I hope and pray that you're doing much better now. Take care of yourself. Bill

reply by Irish Rain on 26-Sep-2016

I am doing better, thank you Mr. Bill...

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

I come from a large family, Several brothers and one sister. They are all gone now. I miss them and wonder if I told them enough I loved them.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you Thomas for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Yes, I'm sure many of us who have lost loved ones over the year's wonder the same thing. I know I do. Have a great day Thomas...Bill

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

I wholeheartedly agree with your sentiments. Tomorrow is not promised to everyone; thus, we must cherish one another today. I am a strong believer in avoiding words such as "would have", "could have" and "should have".

Thank you for this poem. May the readers adhere your advice.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2016

Thank you my friend for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Those three words, "I should have" probably cause a great deal of heart aches within our families. Have a nice day. Bill

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This seems to tick all the boxes applicable to naani. One minute we are here and the next we are gone and that ia the way it goes. We can never really prtepare for it but we should try not to leave too many loose ends trailing at any age or at any time.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Yes, I entirely agree with you. We never know when that time will come, so all we can do is be as prepared as we possibly can. Have a great day my friend. Bill

Comment from judiverse

Exceptional

Congratulations on your contest win. This is a wonderful expression of how precious life is. Sometimes families don't know whether a loved one will return at day's end, things are so uncertain. Very well-measured naani, and you added to the style by using rhyme. Excellent thought, and one we should remember--to cherish life because we never know what may happen. judi

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2016

Thank you very much Judi for your wonderful comments and for the exceptional rating. Your words are so true. We never know when we get out of bed each day, if we will return to bed that night. Enjoy your Sunday my friend. Bill

reply by judiverse on 25-Sep-2016

You're very welcome, Bill. Stay safe. judi