The Decision
Longing for Hope23 total reviews
Comment from sage17611
Nicely written, well thought out poem, with a good message. The poem has a nice flow, the rhyming theme is good. Hope along with faith is all we have at times, I "hope", that you win this contest!
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Nicely written, well thought out poem, with a good message. The poem has a nice flow, the rhyming theme is good. Hope along with faith is all we have at times, I "hope", that you win this contest!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from Liberty Justice
"God Give me hope" is a strong prayer asking the Lord to give character something to live for and to give this person hope. I feel the pain so stongly that poet is enduring. I've been there in those trials and tribulations. There's always hope. LOVELY! liberty justice
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"God Give me hope" is a strong prayer asking the Lord to give character something to live for and to give this person hope. I feel the pain so stongly that poet is enduring. I've been there in those trials and tribulations. There's always hope. LOVELY! liberty justice
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from Pantygynt
Well they say there is faith hope and charity (love). The last being the greatest so go for one of the lesser ones first and you'll make it. I like the poem especially the brief lines totally to the point.
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Well they say there is faith hope and charity (love). The last being the greatest so go for one of the lesser ones first and you'll make it. I like the poem especially the brief lines totally to the point.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Nice poetry, I really enjoyed it. The flow was nice and smooth. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your words with us all. VaV-VOOM!
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Nice poetry, I really enjoyed it. The flow was nice and smooth. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your words with us all. VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from William Ross
A wonderful write on hope a good entry on the prompt, should be a strong contender, good luck on this and have a good day
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A wonderful write on hope a good entry on the prompt, should be a strong contender, good luck on this and have a good day
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from Senyai
This is really lovely and well written. Hope, I found, wasn't easy to describe but you did it well. Deeply emotional elements tinged with pain make this poem so good. Hope is what makes life worth living. This is a strong entry and I am sure it will do well in the contest.
Best to you,
Senyai
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This is really lovely and well written. Hope, I found, wasn't easy to describe but you did it well. Deeply emotional elements tinged with pain make this poem so good. Hope is what makes life worth living. This is a strong entry and I am sure it will do well in the contest.
Best to you,
Senyai
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from tony bronk
It is not clear what "hope" you are holding on too? You created a smooth, meter in your poem that is easy to follow, but your message is a bit foggy, Have a happy write! Tony
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It is not clear what "hope" you are holding on too? You created a smooth, meter in your poem that is easy to follow, but your message is a bit foggy, Have a happy write! Tony
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from c_lucas
Hope is the savior of mankind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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Hope is the savior of mankind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from MacMhuirich
Nicely written for the contest. God gives us great hope and wonderful belief through His great love for us. A wonderful poem to read first thing in the morning. Thank you for sharing and best wises for the contest.
Bless you
John
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Nicely written for the contest. God gives us great hope and wonderful belief through His great love for us. A wonderful poem to read first thing in the morning. Thank you for sharing and best wises for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
Comment from DR DIP
Well you certainly succeeded in delivering the criteria of hope in you wonderfully written poem in ABCB rhyme scheme An enjoyable read of hope with a wonderful accompanying photo image
thanks for sharing
dip
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Well you certainly succeeded in delivering the criteria of hope in you wonderfully written poem in ABCB rhyme scheme An enjoyable read of hope with a wonderful accompanying photo image
thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016