Recognition
Daughter's poem16 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Gretchen
= What a neat story!
= It seems as if it is the most talented who think they are anything but.
= Congrats to Kierry. Dad and Mom have every reason to be proud.
= Thanks for sharing.
= Hey, maybe she'll allow you to post on FanStory so we can read it too. (*<*)
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*:*) Jax
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
Hi, Gretchen
= What a neat story!
= It seems as if it is the most talented who think they are anything but.
= Congrats to Kierry. Dad and Mom have every reason to be proud.
= Thanks for sharing.
= Hey, maybe she'll allow you to post on FanStory so we can read it too. (*<*)
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie (*:*) Jax
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you for your kind words and the great review. Gretchen
Comment from chcbeck
It's seems to me some of the people with the greatest natural abilities are not aware of their talents. A massive well done to your daughter, your pride is clear comes through your words. I love the rewards that a child wants in comparison to what adults require as recognition.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
It's seems to me some of the people with the greatest natural abilities are not aware of their talents. A massive well done to your daughter, your pride is clear comes through your words. I love the rewards that a child wants in comparison to what adults require as recognition.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you for your kind review and the nice words. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie Noland
Congratulations to Keirry. It is always heartening to see a young poet recognized. I would love to see what she wrote, but know that is not possible with the contest ongoing. Her outward response to winning may be that of a typical teen, but you can bet these successes will boost her confidence as well.
I suggest one edit for paragraph 5: her dad and me. But the event is recounted well, and I know you are proud of your daughter.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
Congratulations to Keirry. It is always heartening to see a young poet recognized. I would love to see what she wrote, but know that is not possible with the contest ongoing. Her outward response to winning may be that of a typical teen, but you can bet these successes will boost her confidence as well.
I suggest one edit for paragraph 5: her dad and me. But the event is recounted well, and I know you are proud of your daughter.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Marykelly
Nothing promotes self esteem more than recognition for a job well done. Each success your daughter accomplishes should continue to give her more confidence and of course what could add to the satisfaction more than 75.00? Your story is well told and obviously comes from the heart. Good luck to both of you as writers.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
Nothing promotes self esteem more than recognition for a job well done. Each success your daughter accomplishes should continue to give her more confidence and of course what could add to the satisfaction more than 75.00? Your story is well told and obviously comes from the heart. Good luck to both of you as writers.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Douglas Paul
That is exciting news. You must be very proud of your daughter. She must be pretty talented to win a state competition. Do keep us informed
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
That is exciting news. You must be very proud of your daughter. She must be pretty talented to win a state competition. Do keep us informed
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you for your kind review and the nice words. Gretchen
Comment from Jacob Collins
This was an interesting piece about your daughter and her interest in poetry. Sometimes it does take the will of a parent to push their children in the right direction. I thought that your writing flowed well and I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
This was an interesting piece about your daughter and her interest in poetry. Sometimes it does take the will of a parent to push their children in the right direction. I thought that your writing flowed well and I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you for your wonderful review and the nice words. Gretchen