Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Your kyrielle sonnet is beautifully written and rhymed. Presentation works well with your words. I don't think the small change to the last line matters--at least not to me. Marilyn

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you for your generous comments and analysis. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Exceptional

Hi, Debi...

_ This is such a neat Kyrielle.
_ I like the little tweak you did on the last refrain.
_ Great message about 'truth.'
_ Beautiful presentation.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you for the wonderful six stars, Jax. It brightens the evening. I appreciate the kind comments as well. Thank you for the encouragement. Debi
I'll be dropping by soon. I see you have a new chapter.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Deb. What a great job you've done on this. I sincerely wish I had a six foryou.

"And just like Ruth, I'm in His care.
He knows my needs and hears my prayer.
I am so small, His plan so grand,
as I accept His guiding hand."

Brilliant poetry. Blessings. Bob

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Hi Bob,
Thank you for the virtual sixer and the kind comments. I appreciate the encouragement.

I see you have w new chapter out so I'll be dropping by soon.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem- Good rhythm and even flow with excellent word choices and attractive format.
Nicely done!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you for the kind comments. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

Comment from Writingfundimension

Exceptional

Hi, Debi.

I just love this thoughtful and beautiful poem. The following, especially, resonates with me:

'And just like Ruth, I'm in his care.
He knows my needs and hears my prayer.
I am so small, His plan so grand,
as I accept His guiding hand.'

A well-deserved sixer for this Kyrielle Sonnet!

Hugs, Bev

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Hi Bev,
Thank you so much for the shiny six stars! I appreciate you pointing out the stanza you like and for the encouraging comments. I am so happy to know you enjoyed this verse.
Debi

reply by Writingfundimension on 01-Jul-2015

You're very welcome, Debi. Well-deserved! :) Bev

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

This is a lovely Kyrielle sonnet with a
spiritual message WJ. I like your refrain
line but I love your third quatrain.
:<) Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015

Thank you for the encouraging comments, Nancy. I appreciate you pointing out the quatrain you liked--loved best. It is helpful to get the feedback. I questioned if that quatrain needed some more work, but you and a few others have selected it as their favorite so I am going to leave it be. Thank you. Debi

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi good friend,
This is the best way to be and remain safe. This is the way not to be waylaid by imagination .
At least here in his trust you are and you will be what you are.
So keep your faith, which is i portant for him to get in touch with you. God bless
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you for the insightful comments and encouragement. I appreciate it Benny Beeharry.
Debi

Comment from gypsymoth

Excellent

Well done. The story of Ruth, a mother-in-law's perfect
daughter-in-law. The art work is awesome.
Gypsymoth

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015

Thank you for the encouraging review, Gypsymoth. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Debi

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Debbie, you had my head spinning with the details on the sonnet and kyrielle, syllable counts, quatrains, couplets, refrains etc, (I'm not a poet in any way). But, you did spin a wonderful poem citing Ruth 1:16-18. Very enjoyable. Smooth, and comforting.

Nicely done... John

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Hi John,
I am happy you liked the poem and its topic. I appreciate the encouraging comments. LOL on the author notes comments. Sometimes all the rules for some of these strict forms get my head spinning too. I do find them fun to work at though. Sort of a different kind of tetras puzzle.

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is yet another interesting and spiritual poem that the author has created with this piece of work. I loved reading this. Well done indeed.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015

Thank you for the complimentary review. I am pleased to hear you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

reply by Tomes Johnston on 02-Jul-2015

My pleasure