Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from bayforesthimankush
This poem illustrates ten poets with different characteristics. Every one is different and has different characteristics. One is rich, one is poor, one is intelligent, and one is foolish and so on. This is one's reality of existence in the present state.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
This poem illustrates ten poets with different characteristics. Every one is different and has different characteristics. One is rich, one is poor, one is intelligent, and one is foolish and so on. This is one's reality of existence in the present state.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent wite, lij, brooke would be proud. I was thinking of her counting poems too. you should put this in the book that was started for her. I was so sad to read the forum about her illness.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
this is an excellent wite, lij, brooke would be proud. I was thinking of her counting poems too. you should put this in the book that was started for her. I was so sad to read the forum about her illness.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I asked Tom to add this post to the book Joy Graham is assembling as a letter to Brooke. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Chrissy710
Oh I liked this and cackled all the way through, what a funny poem, and each verse kept me smiling, as I was thinking of all the different styles and subjects written about. Clever Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
Oh I liked this and cackled all the way through, what a funny poem, and each verse kept me smiling, as I was thinking of all the different styles and subjects written about. Clever Cheers Christine
Comment Written 27-May-2015
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Thanks very much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from country ranch writer
A little slip of a word can put you out of the running finding your self scratching your head oh shucks I didn't mean to say it
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reply by the author on 27-May-2015
A little slip of a word can put you out of the running finding your self scratching your head oh shucks I didn't mean to say it
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Comment Written 27-May-2015
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Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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welcome
Comment from Jay Squires
Funny, as usual, Red. My favorite stanza:
Seven poets writing
in meter that clicks
one had to insert "did"
then there were six.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
Funny, as usual, Red. My favorite stanza:
Seven poets writing
in meter that clicks
one had to insert "did"
then there were six.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I had in mind to contribute this to the book for Brooke, then thought maybe I was too rough on the poets. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Gloria ....
Red! This is excellent and why didn't you put this in the get well card for Brooke? She would be thrilled to read this perfect and hilariously entertaining counting poem.
Reverse syntax is one of my all time favourite elimination tactics. LOL and the conjugation of to do, did.
LOL, this is absolutely brilliant. I love it! See if Tom can move it over into Joy's book, pretty please.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 27-May-2015
Red! This is excellent and why didn't you put this in the get well card for Brooke? She would be thrilled to read this perfect and hilariously entertaining counting poem.
Reverse syntax is one of my all time favourite elimination tactics. LOL and the conjugation of to do, did.
LOL, this is absolutely brilliant. I love it! See if Tom can move it over into Joy's book, pretty please.
Gloria
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Comment Written 27-May-2015
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I will do that.