Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

There is always another twist or turn to this story and you are giving the readers just enough information to keep them interested. At least Doctrix seems to be on to Rheuther's games and he has the ears of his men who seem to trust him completely. That won't be part of Rheuther's plans, I'm sure.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Oh, you don't know what you almost fell on. But my lips are sealed. Haha, thanks, Linda, for sticking around.

reply by lindalcreel on 27-Oct-2014

Now my mind is really going into overdrive. LOL

Comment from Walter L. Jones

Exceptional

Simple magic, purgatory, foreshadow, dust to dust, history compared, relive again and again, just a touch of the road ahead, once again a good play with thoughts and words..Walt

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thank you, Walt. Love that Purgatory, foreshadow!

Comment from rjpurdy

Excellent

Great building bloick of anticipation Jay. I especially appreciate the in depth description of Rheuther and his magical intent. I feel the story comning to the point where it has to burst. I am anxious to read how you capture us with the action. A fantastic mix of back story and pending events. Thank you Jay for letting me enjoy the ride.

~Peace & Grace~ Rod

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thank YOU for jumping aboard, Rod. Yes, building, building, building, slowly building for the next mini-climax, resolution, building --wait for it -- it'll be worth the wait, Rod. I hope.

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi. I am up early to read,. I sit with a hot coffee, a cozy, fluffy house coat and find myself shivering. I think you got winter down!These poor bast****. I guess that says it all, I am involved in their story.
padumachitta

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thanks, Padumachitta. Gather your housecoat tightly around you and enjoy your coffee.

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

This is fine writing, Jay. I don't think I've ever found a single typo or mistake. I always find I can read unimpeded. And now we are creeping ever closer to a climax I cannot wait for, Giddy

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Well, there will be a lot of rises and falls and with each will be a mini-climax, resolution, etc., but only one major climax. I hope you enjoy the mini climaxes as well.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Mind control depends on just that. the ability to control another's mind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

thanks for reading, Charlie.

reply by c_lucas on 27-Oct-2014

You're welcome, Jay. Charlie

Comment from royowen

Excellent

So it looks like Glnot Reuther's plans are mostly just that, illusion an magic but not Mapuche reality, great follow up to your last episode Jay, they are being written by a imaginative and skilled writer, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thank you, Roy. I'm glad you're enjoying my chapters. Now I need to go look up Mapuche reality. God Bless.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

These men need to ready for anything at anytime. They never know what's going to happen, then surprise, something happens. Good job.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thanks, Barbara. Yes it must be unnerving at best.

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

More good reading. Looking forward to the excitement that is ahead from what you said previously. There are no spags in this chapter. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thanks, Geoff. Glad to have you aboard. Happy your enjoying the ride.

reply by Sankey on 27-Oct-2014

Will try and get the chorus tume done today or tomorrow. If my hearing was better I would have a go at singing it for you but it will just be the tune only. What I might do is put it on one of my Web site pages and give you a link to that so you can hear it.

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

That would be fun!

reply by Sankey on 27-Oct-2014

Would you mind if I put the words on my web site just for the trial?

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Not at all. Go for it.

reply by Sankey on 27-Oct-2014

Look for the Lyrics at Number 5 on http://funnymentaloz.witnesstoday.org/songs.html let you know when the music is up. Got this great application from Face book a few weeks ago I just tried it on your lyrics for a © sign ya worked again

reply by Sankey on 27-Oct-2014

Number 6 music not on yet just lyrics

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

I saw the lyrics there, Geoff! Good job there. Let me know when the music is up. I listened to the music on the "bar" above the lyrics. Catchy tune that! Hey, Geoff, thanks for taking an interest in this.

reply by Sankey on 27-Oct-2014

Yeah the bar above yours is for the song before was that about the Not what you know but who you know that counts? That song is mentioned in one of the chapters of my book re the job at Veteran's affairs. I got the "©" on there for the first time using a gizmo someone gave us on Face book.

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

Does Rhuether have poor math skills? LOL just thought it was a funny line.

So what is the magician capable of? What is his doing? And what is just poor dumb bad luck? Interesting thoughts.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014

Thank you, Maria. I think Doctrex is trying to convince Braims and himself that Rhuether's not as big a threat as he might truly be.