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A farm boy receives a warning about an Indian attack.
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Comment from
sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this first page of the book. it hooks the reader's interest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
I am very pleased this scene hooked your interest. Thanks for your kind praise and best wishes.
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Jackreese
Seems to be the makings of a good novel. Will they attack the settlements or is it just talk. So many routes to go with this. I would be interested in seeing more if that is the case. You are off to a good start.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
Black Hawk never did attack this settlement. The story will tell Asa's adventures chasing after him with the Illinois militia and Abraham Lincoln. Thank you for your kind comments.
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