Shepherd
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "My Shepherd"poems inspired by Psalm 23
28 total reviews
Comment from L.A.Matthies
Keep trying every new form and experience, we only have now and you've done an excellent job with this piece. Lovely work and image to compliment it. :)Linda
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Keep trying every new form and experience, we only have now and you've done an excellent job with this piece. Lovely work and image to compliment it. :)Linda
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Greet advice, Linda. Thank you for the encouragement, both for life and writing. :) Debi
Comment from Benny Beeharry
If we had not loitered in this life, we would be a 100per cent with Him.
But loitering is part of life.
We need to loiter and feel the need to be back again..
Loiter is life itself. Do not be afraid. This is an unpublished writing of mine.
Those are blessed who remember their way back or seek to go back.
A lovely writing and a lovely message.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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If we had not loitered in this life, we would be a 100per cent with Him.
But loitering is part of life.
We need to loiter and feel the need to be back again..
Loiter is life itself. Do not be afraid. This is an unpublished writing of mine.
Those are blessed who remember their way back or seek to go back.
A lovely writing and a lovely message.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thank you for sharing your wonderful words, Benny Beeharry. There is always the sense of the profound in your writing.
I appreciate you stopping by to review and offer encouragement.
I hope your attempt at publishing is going well. I hope to see something new on your page soon. Debi
Comment from Zue65
This poem speaks of the popular Bible story where God left His flock in order to look for just one lost sheep. This explains the depth of God's love for everyone. He shall search even for just one soul and bring him back. That's how God loves His children.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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This poem speaks of the popular Bible story where God left His flock in order to look for just one lost sheep. This explains the depth of God's love for everyone. He shall search even for just one soul and bring him back. That's how God loves His children.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Think you for sharing your insight and wonderful comments on the story. You are so right.
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I ve never tried a risotto, but this is a perfect one, with perfect rhyming and a lovely flow, the wording was lovely , I really enjoyed, well done on your first one,
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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I ve never tried a risotto, but this is a perfect one, with perfect rhyming and a lovely flow, the wording was lovely , I really enjoyed, well done on your first one,
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging comments I am so happy you liked it.
Comment from country ranch writer
Oh so lost but not alone for the Shepard found him and then they herd was complete once again to travel on to their destination
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Oh so lost but not alone for the Shepard found him and then they herd was complete once again to travel on to their destination
Comment Written 31-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thank you for sharing your insights and the encouraging review. I appreciate it.
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welcome
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming in good rispetto format
good iambic tetrameter too, for the form
A most thoughtful poetic retelling of this Bible story as you deliver a strong message of faith
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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solid rhyming in good rispetto format
good iambic tetrameter too, for the form
A most thoughtful poetic retelling of this Bible story as you deliver a strong message of faith
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Brooke. I always appreciate your encouragement and generous comments.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debi - your underlying message was well penned. Though your author notes helped me as well... this made me stop and think over the concept of "no man is left behind" but now for sheep. Nicely done and creative.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Dear Debi - your underlying message was well penned. Though your author notes helped me as well... this made me stop and think over the concept of "no man is left behind" but now for sheep. Nicely done and creative.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Maureen. In the parable, sheep are used as a metaphor for people so looks like you got the meaning of the story both ways. Thank you so much for you encouraging comments and generous review. I always appreciate hearing from you. Debi
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LOL yeah for me and I didn't even know:)
Hugs
M
Comment from c_lucas
This brought back memories of the picture on my mothers wall of Jesus holding a lamb as other sheep grazed around them. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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This brought back memories of the picture on my mothers wall of Jesus holding a lamb as other sheep grazed around them. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thank you, c_lucas. I had the same sort of image as your mother's picture in my mind as I was writing it. I just couldn't find one like it on fanart and I struggle to download from the web. I appreciate the kind comments about the writing and appreciate your support.
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find one on Google Image, Save it to an image hosting program (I use photo shop) You're welcome, WJ. Charlie
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Thank you, Charlie. Maybe I'll give it a try tomorrow night after work.
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You're welcome, WJ. Charlie
Comment from krys123
W.j.debi, Truly truly such a inspirational, enlightening and didactic poem definitely shows your creativeness, inventiveness and resourcefulness. The simplicity of your poems shows the wonderful imagination that you create to fulfill the readers mind the glory of God. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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W.j.debi, Truly truly such a inspirational, enlightening and didactic poem definitely shows your creativeness, inventiveness and resourcefulness. The simplicity of your poems shows the wonderful imagination that you create to fulfill the readers mind the glory of God. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Alex. I appreciate your very encouraging review. You are so generous.
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You are so entirely and sincerely welcome.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a lovely rispetto, debi :) the rispetto is one of my favorite forms to play with. Your theme fits in well on a Sunday afternoon. Goves me much to think about. Good message to share. Always a pleasure to read your work!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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This is a lovely rispetto, debi :) the rispetto is one of my favorite forms to play with. Your theme fits in well on a Sunday afternoon. Goves me much to think about. Good message to share. Always a pleasure to read your work!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2014
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You are so kind, Joy. Thank you for the encouraging review and generous stars.