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Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written poem. Flowers are beautiful in the spring season. I can feel the love for Buttercups in your poem. Your message is clear, and your words paints a beautiful picture. Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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This was a well written poem. Flowers are beautiful in the spring season. I can feel the love for Buttercups in your poem. Your message is clear, and your words paints a beautiful picture. Nice job.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review, glad you enjoyed it! :)
Comment from rouskin
Enjoyable read, good artwork and clear message:Buttercups in jelly jars make me want to cry for once were tiny yellow flowers are now just years gone by Nicely done Best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Enjoyable read, good artwork and clear message:Buttercups in jelly jars make me want to cry for once were tiny yellow flowers are now just years gone by Nicely done Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for the kind review!!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the images of your children and the flowers they picked and put in jelly jars and the years that have passed by
images are portrayed well
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the images of your children and the flowers they picked and put in jelly jars and the years that have passed by
images are portrayed well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you, I believe that all of us with children or grandchildren know this all to well.
Comment from RYME4U
This has a sad nostalgic ring to it. I still have "hand turkeys" stuck on my refrigerator so I know how you feel.Nicely written!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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This has a sad nostalgic ring to it. I still have "hand turkeys" stuck on my refrigerator so I know how you feel.Nicely written!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you, My children are grown and I do too have things on the fridge that my children made...
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is such a sweet memory written in poetic verse. It brought back memories for me as well and I miss those days:)
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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This is such a sweet memory written in poetic verse. It brought back memories for me as well and I miss those days:)
~Teresa~
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, I miss those days also...but I'm soon to be a grandma so the cycle begins again :)
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Yea for you. Grandkids are great:)
Comment from 24chas
This was really a lovely write. It was about a spring, but it was not the usual, it was tinged with a feeling of bittersweet, which was great. Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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This was really a lovely write. It was about a spring, but it was not the usual, it was tinged with a feeling of bittersweet, which was great. Nice job.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your kind words and wonderful review!!
Comment from Cajungirl
What a beautiful spring time poem, good flow and rhymes. A great entry in the contest. Early congrats on your granddaughter. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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What a beautiful spring time poem, good flow and rhymes. A great entry in the contest. Early congrats on your granddaughter. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, I so appreciate your kind words.
Comment from judester
What a beautiful poem. Evokes those simple days gone by and flowers limp but beautiful in a tiny fist. A great image and flowing style, good luck, Judester
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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What a beautiful poem. Evokes those simple days gone by and flowers limp but beautiful in a tiny fist. A great image and flowing style, good luck, Judester
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from seaglass
Such a sweet and gently memory poem I t brought tears to my eyes, remembering my little one bringing me wild mountains violets and dandelions. The setting or yellow with the lovely picture did justice to a fine poem
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Such a sweet and gently memory poem I t brought tears to my eyes, remembering my little one bringing me wild mountains violets and dandelions. The setting or yellow with the lovely picture did justice to a fine poem
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much...it is a bittersweet memory, I wish they could stay little forever sometimes, but so happy they are starting lives of their own with a new baby on the way...then they will realize the love I had for them.
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Comment from DonandVicki
"Buttercups in jelly jars" nice alliteration and the verse creates quite a mental image. Nicely written and a joy to read. Don and Vicki
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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"Buttercups in jelly jars" nice alliteration and the verse creates quite a mental image. Nicely written and a joy to read. Don and Vicki
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review...