Comment from mfowler

Excellent

There is no point commenting on the quality of verse here, as its very well structured, metered, and rhymed. You really have upped the ante in this write. I've noticed intelligent women on this site swooning, writing, and pretending offence, as they are pulled into your so called 'challenge's' web. Now you offer them sensational sex. I'm being a touch voyeuristic here, but I can't wait to see what they offer to you.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

Thank you very much, mfowler. Yes, they don't even realize that victory isn't won once they're on the page, it's won by getting them there in the first place. ;-) I'm sure they'll be back with one of three defenses, as they've all been more or less along the lines of too quick, too small, or too bad. Well, in their case, it's too late. Once a rogue has been there, he's already had what he wanted to begin with. Anyway, thank you, and please feel free to continue standing outside the window. Just don't fog it up too much.

Comment from The Death

Excellent

Well, what should I say??..LOL
This is very wisely written Naughty poem. People like your alter ego's creations very much.
There are so many verses which offer a nice dose of laugh and fun. You have aced with this one again.
I think he shouldn't retire.
I enjoyed reading this.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

Thank you very much, my friend. Yes, I may have taken it a little too far on this one, but I was just following my pen, just as the rogue follow his...well, you know. Oh, he won't retire as long as there are those still calling him out.

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Well this is a very good poem, and I know this is been a lot of fun for you and the ladies. I must say you always a very good poem concerning this subject. I'm not sure sir but I think the ladies have won.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014

Yes, it's been great fun, and thank you for the review. I couldn't, however, disagree more about your opinion of the "winner". I haven't even begun to fight, and they keep drawing in reinforcements. I'm happy to fight by my lonesome and have them play off of my words.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I think the last verse needs to be changed slightly it disrupts the flow of the poem a little I think very well written thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

I'm not sure what you mean about the last verse, as it's in perfect meter, dmt, but I appreciate the review. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Alright, Marillion. Now we're talking (or something like that) I absolutely loved the way you composed this naughty ditty. It will be interesting to see the reviews from the women. LOL...Bob

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you very much, my friend. Not only reviews...but retorts.

Comment from Tatarka2

Excellent

I'm not really a fan of this kind of content - but good writing is good writing! This was fun and funny. The rhyming made the poem flow hilariously along, and of course the reader is engaged throughout. Not so long as to be distasteful, but long enough to express what you needed to express. Just good (not too clean) fun all the way. Good job.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you very much, Tatarka2. All in good fun, but it feels kind of good being bad. I appreciate it.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Exceptional

Wow David. I get a kick out of just clicking on the over 18 Warning page!
Will I need the fake book cover so no one knows what I am reading? Oh, and not to disappoint your clever verbiage and such witty linescontinues to roll off the tongue! More, More. Smiles, Robin :)

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you very much, my friend! I really appreciate the sixer, Robin, and the bravery to click beyond the warning. ;-)

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

In the James Bond movie, "Tomorrow Never Dies", Moneypenny refers to James Bond as a "cunning linguist." So, other than the title, your poem is very original. It's naughty, bawdy and tawdry. A bit Chaucer-esque. The poet wars are very entertaining. I'm a happy spectator.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thanks, GLG. I've heard the term before, and wasn't trying to pass it off as my own concoction. Thank you very much for the great review. I like the Chaucer-esque comment, as I've alway loved his work.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Well written erotic piece that has many ladies on a tizzy. I've scanned some rogue vs rougette poems here and there and chose not to offer anything. Don't know how and when it all started, so I'll let you bask in all the glory...
Enjoy, John

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you, John. I posted one as my "alter-ego" and invited others to join in for a poetic exercise, and many have. It's all in fun, and we're enjoying the tit-for-tat of it all. I appreciate you taking a look.

David

reply by jmdg1954 on 24-Jan-2014

I know it's all in fun... I've seen many posts and stayed away from most.

Comment from Aletheia

Exceptional

Ok, I'm on my lunch break at work here, and I just read this to my male co-worker, whose face is now bright red. LOL This is hilarious! Who are these 'admirers'? Whoever they are, they've mused a great poem. Awesome word play. :) Can't pick a fav. Loved it from start to finish. The poem, that is. :P

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014

Thank you very much, begonia! I really appreciate the great review, the sixer (and here's a niner to balance it out), and the kind words.

"Loved it from start to finish." (That's what she said)

reply by Aletheia on 24-Jan-2014

hahaha...I guess that's what they all say, eh?