Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Gift"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from Cindy Warren
Imagine going to bed and finding that on your pillow! I think Squishy needs a litter box. Once I accidently locked Willow in my office and she left a present in my leather chair. It's hard to be mad at the cats when it's not really their fault.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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Imagine going to bed and finding that on your pillow! I think Squishy needs a litter box. Once I accidently locked Willow in my office and she left a present in my leather chair. It's hard to be mad at the cats when it's not really their fault.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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Yeah, I really loved Squishy. After I moved out, I got an orange cat from the SPCA so I could have a Squishy of my own.
Comment from FrannyG
What a horror story. And it had the appearance of being such a kind act. What a disappointment. A good, but rather unsavoury, subject for a 5-7-5! But well done.
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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What a horror story. And it had the appearance of being such a kind act. What a disappointment. A good, but rather unsavoury, subject for a 5-7-5! But well done.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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Thank you, FrannyG. :)
Comment from Smoothiecool
a picture would enhance your 5-7-5 poem
you have all the right components for the 5-7-5 contest
the first and third line have the five syllables
the second the seven syllable count
like the twist
good luck in competition
Cheers SC
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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a picture would enhance your 5-7-5 poem
you have all the right components for the 5-7-5 contest
the first and third line have the five syllables
the second the seven syllable count
like the twist
good luck in competition
Cheers SC
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2013
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I don't know if a picture of the event would be banned or not. Hee!