Response From Your Courtesan
What you do not see...53 total reviews
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with words flowing well and rhyming and telling such a sad story. How one is missing the love of someone else. Wanting that love to reappear.
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Good poem with words flowing well and rhyming and telling such a sad story. How one is missing the love of someone else. Wanting that love to reappear.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from michaelcahill
this was worthy of several reads to really let it sink in. the skill and depth with which this was written became more and more apparent with each read. this is really excellent. the form is perfect. the thought process and flow amazing. the depth of feelings expressed I understand in every way and I hope others are lucky enough to have experienced them like this. I believe this is the first work of yours that I have run across. what a wonderful introduction. love you already. mike
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this was worthy of several reads to really let it sink in. the skill and depth with which this was written became more and more apparent with each read. this is really excellent. the form is perfect. the thought process and flow amazing. the depth of feelings expressed I understand in every way and I hope others are lucky enough to have experienced them like this. I believe this is the first work of yours that I have run across. what a wonderful introduction. love you already. mike
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from Gabrieltheswifter
I really liked this poem, the form is nice, and the imagery is stark and beautiful. I know the feeling and can relate to this poem! XD keep up the good work.
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I really liked this poem, the form is nice, and the imagery is stark and beautiful. I know the feeling and can relate to this poem! XD keep up the good work.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from vapros
You have crafted an almost violent expression of your love for one who is absent. You describe the imagined rage that would permit you to be even more descriptive. Is this person gone forever? Well done.
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You have crafted an almost violent expression of your love for one who is absent. You describe the imagined rage that would permit you to be even more descriptive. Is this person gone forever? Well done.
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from Pullmanspb
The ache and longing for the other person is palpably painful. "Palpably painful," I like that phrase.
It never seems to drop out of character, the view of the world is always from the writer's perspective.
Something that made me read it a couple times, to better and better like it.
Steven
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The ache and longing for the other person is palpably painful. "Palpably painful," I like that phrase.
It never seems to drop out of character, the view of the world is always from the writer's perspective.
Something that made me read it a couple times, to better and better like it.
Steven
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from Irish Rain
what a beautiful longing is expressed here, i loved the entire poem, especially...filling up my quiet rooms...thank you for sharing! blessings this evening!
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what a beautiful longing is expressed here, i loved the entire poem, especially...filling up my quiet rooms...thank you for sharing! blessings this evening!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from Caressa_08
I guess, being the life of a mistress or prostitute can be lonely...Though, think this poem can even hold true if one is not, except for the last stanza seems to suggest it's a relationship of distance...And,the poem suggests very much she is in love with this client...
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I guess, being the life of a mistress or prostitute can be lonely...Though, think this poem can even hold true if one is not, except for the last stanza seems to suggest it's a relationship of distance...And,the poem suggests very much she is in love with this client...
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Few pieces truly strike a cord with me as this one has. I am never quite sure if relationships between two truly understand the way it is when it's over. A seriously good write for me this morning. Thank you. xoxo Kiwi
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Few pieces truly strike a cord with me as this one has. I am never quite sure if relationships between two truly understand the way it is when it's over. A seriously good write for me this morning. Thank you. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from mickbey
A very strong emotional display in this poem, it digs deep, the first stanza comes out strong and the passion continues, it makes a personal connection with the reader, most anyone would like to receive a response like this, nice piece.
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A very strong emotional display in this poem, it digs deep, the first stanza comes out strong and the passion continues, it makes a personal connection with the reader, most anyone would like to receive a response like this, nice piece.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A lovely free verse. 'You cannot expect me to read your mind while I am losing mine' - a good start to your poem. 'complex, cohesive, concrete' nice use of alliteration. A good love poem. Regards Dorothy
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A lovely free verse. 'You cannot expect me to read your mind while I am losing mine' - a good start to your poem. 'complex, cohesive, concrete' nice use of alliteration. A good love poem. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013