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poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings

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Comment from Nuad1
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An absolutely fun poem for Halloween (which I cannot believe is upon us already!). Even though it was fun and light it held an element of "spookiness" i.e. "use you in my recipe". I intend to read this to my Sunday School class as I know they will ooh and ahh. Good job.

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2013
    Thank you for your review,and have fun with it.Make or buy some finger cookies to go with it,my class loved it Blessings.