Waterfall Wonder
Quatrains23 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming couplets
good alliteration in today/tomorrow/tis the time
and in forever fill
vivid descriptive detail of setting that creates a serene mood effectively :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
solid rhyming couplets
good alliteration in today/tomorrow/tis the time
and in forever fill
vivid descriptive detail of setting that creates a serene mood effectively :-) Brooke
Comment Written 14-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from w.j.debi
Waterfalls do have a magical way of refreshing, renewing and calming the spirit. You describe it well. Makes me want to go find a waterfall right now and enjoy the sensation. You have captured the essence of the waterfall well. Good choice of artwork to support your theme.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
Waterfalls do have a magical way of refreshing, renewing and calming the spirit. You describe it well. Makes me want to go find a waterfall right now and enjoy the sensation. You have captured the essence of the waterfall well. Good choice of artwork to support your theme.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from donaldww
I like your water quatrains, written as paired couplets. Water has a cleansing effect, evening watching and listening to one can feel like being in the shower. Allowing creativity to come out.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
I like your water quatrains, written as paired couplets. Water has a cleansing effect, evening watching and listening to one can feel like being in the shower. Allowing creativity to come out.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Deb. This entire presentation is marvelous in my opinion. I especially liked this stanza:
"With new spirit and refreshed mind
To myself, I can now be kind
Ridding myself of my self-doubt
Allows my creativity to come out"
Uplifting and inspirational. Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
Hi, Deb. This entire presentation is marvelous in my opinion. I especially liked this stanza:
"With new spirit and refreshed mind
To myself, I can now be kind
Ridding myself of my self-doubt
Allows my creativity to come out"
Uplifting and inspirational. Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Debbie, I think this is a keeper. So far as I can tell, it is perfectly penned and with picture and poem make a perfect pair for presentation. I enjoyed the read and the message. Thanks for sharing this with your friend, Bob
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
Debbie, I think this is a keeper. So far as I can tell, it is perfectly penned and with picture and poem make a perfect pair for presentation. I enjoyed the read and the message. Thanks for sharing this with your friend, Bob
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend. I am glad you enjoyed this one~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Debbie,
Nicely penned quatrains with solid rhyming sequence. Also really liked the message of wisdom not only inner self improvement but also for the rest of us too.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
Hi Debbie,
Nicely penned quatrains with solid rhyming sequence. Also really liked the message of wisdom not only inner self improvement but also for the rest of us too.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I was about to give this a 4 star review because I wasn't finding any poetic devices other than a rhyme scheme and a little alliteration in the title, but then I caught "forever fill" for a little more alliteration. So it's sweet and sincere.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
I was about to give this a 4 star review because I wasn't finding any poetic devices other than a rhyme scheme and a little alliteration in the title, but then I caught "forever fill" for a little more alliteration. So it's sweet and sincere.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from mizzkris20
Wow!!!! I love this! I hope you don't mind me pointing out my total fav stanza
Gone are the worries of today
Tomorrow's not yet on the way
'Tis the time to listen and be still
And my soul will forever fill
Just beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
Wow!!!! I love this! I hope you don't mind me pointing out my total fav stanza
Gone are the worries of today
Tomorrow's not yet on the way
'Tis the time to listen and be still
And my soul will forever fill
Just beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from JW
This is an interesting poem. Before reading it I had not drawn a parallel between the falling water of a waterfall and the cleansing of one's soul.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
This is an interesting poem. Before reading it I had not drawn a parallel between the falling water of a waterfall and the cleansing of one's soul.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much, my friend~Debbie
Comment from RPFoster
Very lovely indeed, I can relate so well to your experience, my cleansing comes from walks in the rain, but I also frequent waterfalls. Very well written, I enjoyed how well it flowed.
Blessings 2u
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
Very lovely indeed, I can relate so well to your experience, my cleansing comes from walks in the rain, but I also frequent waterfalls. Very well written, I enjoyed how well it flowed.
Blessings 2u
Robert
Comment Written 13-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am glad you enjoyed it~Debbie