All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Alone in Paris"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from rjuselius
congratulations on the win in this writing prompt!
the imagery is perfect, you can imagine paris at night.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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congratulations on the win in this writing prompt!
the imagery is perfect, you can imagine paris at night.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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thx Rebekka - this one was fun!
Comment from hollyleann
Wowsa! I can see why you won this contest. The photo goes very well with your words. I felt like I was intruding on a room that someone forgot to lock the door to. Very steamy. Very sentual. Very very.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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Wowsa! I can see why you won this contest. The photo goes very well with your words. I felt like I was intruding on a room that someone forgot to lock the door to. Very steamy. Very sentual. Very very.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2012
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glad you enjoyed the sizzle holly!
Comment from Charade
I think you did a wonderful job conveying magnetism. I know this feeling, though I don't know it in Paris. I am curious where your idea came from?
I wish romance could still be alive after marriage, but sadly since it isn't a basic necessity, sometimes it lacks. Keep writing wonderful poems that we can visualize ourselves in!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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I think you did a wonderful job conveying magnetism. I know this feeling, though I don't know it in Paris. I am curious where your idea came from?
I wish romance could still be alive after marriage, but sadly since it isn't a basic necessity, sometimes it lacks. Keep writing wonderful poems that we can visualize ourselves in!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thx Charade - so glad you enjoyed it! The inspiration simply came from the prompt re "black and white movie" - I used to love them as a kid and knew exactly what they meant by "tantalising" - what fun! :) Sharyn
Comment from Gungalo
Wow girl, where was this one hiding all this time. I never even saw it and it has been judged the contest winner. Wowowowow, it's hot and very persuasive. You go girlie.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Wow girl, where was this one hiding all this time. I never even saw it and it has been judged the contest winner. Wowowowow, it's hot and very persuasive. You go girlie.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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when it's in a competition, "fans" aren't notified as it's a blind contest thing Gungalo - I had fun channeling you dear one!
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Must have LOL
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Aloha Sharyn! How much more romantic can you get than a stranger in Paris.. unless it's paradise! This is beautiful, sensual, and oh so romantic. Congratulations on winning the competition. Well-deserved. Giddy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Aloha Sharyn! How much more romantic can you get than a stranger in Paris.. unless it's paradise! This is beautiful, sensual, and oh so romantic. Congratulations on winning the competition. Well-deserved. Giddy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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thx Giddy - this was such fun! :) Sharyn
Comment from Dodey
Wonderful, had me glued from start to finish..Sensual and provocative with amazing imagery from your great choice of words..Love the layout, the picture, the entire, all went to make for a great reading experience. I think I stopped breathing a few times too during the read..lol..Bravo..Dee.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Wonderful, had me glued from start to finish..Sensual and provocative with amazing imagery from your great choice of words..Love the layout, the picture, the entire, all went to make for a great reading experience. I think I stopped breathing a few times too during the read..lol..Bravo..Dee.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Do glad you enjoyed this fun piece Dee - because I had great fun writing it. You can breathe now!! :)
Comment from RaymondJohn
It is very exciting when you don't know the person you're so attracted to. I enjoyed the development and the heat. Fun read. Best of luck in the contest. You should have a good chance. Ray.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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It is very exciting when you don't know the person you're so attracted to. I enjoyed the development and the heat. Fun read. Best of luck in the contest. You should have a good chance. Ray.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Thx Ray - I won this one!! yeah!!
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a sensual flow of words, making for a very good read. Congratulations on your first place win. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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This is very well written with a sensual flow of words, making for a very good read. Congratulations on your first place win. Good job.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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thx Charlie!
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You're welcome, Sharyn
Comment from Titanx9
This is a "wow" poem that's both provocative and sensuous. The perfect love set up! Your refrain throughout, "I don't know you," adds a wistfulness and a desire to do all types of naughty things with him if you could just get to know him. I especially like the chocolate part - I'm easy like that, lol! Overall, I enjoyed reading this one!!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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This is a "wow" poem that's both provocative and sensuous. The perfect love set up! Your refrain throughout, "I don't know you," adds a wistfulness and a desire to do all types of naughty things with him if you could just get to know him. I especially like the chocolate part - I'm easy like that, lol! Overall, I enjoyed reading this one!!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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Glad you're a sucker for chocolate too, Titan - you're so EASY! :) Sharyn
Comment from steevie
I can see why this won the contest! This poem brought out the naughty girl in you :O
well done
it was a quick read and it read smoothly, like velet.
steve
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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I can see why this won the contest! This poem brought out the naughty girl in you :O
well done
it was a quick read and it read smoothly, like velet.
steve
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2012
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naughty girls have fun occasionally, yes? :)
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The very name suggests such a thing ... LOL
steve