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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from jclark
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Yikes! My hands started sweating as soon as Sam crashed his car. I could feel her heart pounding rushing to get home and lock themselves in. Clearly she should have gone to Paul's house. Intense and action filled chapter.
Judy

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rattler
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Your telling a hard tail here. Child abduction. I've seen it first hand myself. Your chapter is moving on so many levels. Great work.

Thanks for letting me read it.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sharrum
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Wow, this was an amazing read. Nothing that I expected when I seen that it was a romance novel. Great job...you certainly can write a story. Keep on writing.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review,
Comment from ulster3
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Hello, barbara.
This is an exceptional chapter. A great edge of seat write! However, I could just grip Anna and shake her. Did she forget the man who rushed her car before!!!!! I'm so involved emotionally here ... Fantastic work.
Warmly, Rebecca

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for the kind revewi.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
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A powerful chapter; this shows that when determined others can do wrongs. I hope your next part will show they will not get by with it.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
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Another excellent chapter, barbara. You've left me on the edge of my seat with your ending. Good pacing and the usual top-notch writing. Warm regards, Bev

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for your kind review.
reply by Writingfundimension on 15-Mar-2012
    You're welcome, barbara.
Comment from elgone
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This continues to be a compelling write. I really feel for Anna. I have known several young women who have bravely endured very bad situation because there are children involved or they blame themselves or the children as the source of the abuse. This is really a much larger social problem than people want to believe. And the worst part of it is that it breeds abuse in ensuing generations.

E

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
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hiya,
hope remember i am just reletively new to your book and just figuring it out so i hope i have the right gist so far, bobby seems to be behind alot of the tensions going on here which is making thrilling reading you are leaving the reader with alot of suspense which is great

welldone

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from abbasjoy
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Wow! This gets more and more interesting. The suspense is great and we know Bobby is ultimately behind this whole plot to harass, hurt and ultimately kill Anna. What we never know is how he is going to do it, which is what keeps us on our toes. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Great writing.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review and support.
reply by abbasjoy on 19-Mar-2012
    Well deserved stars. Great writing.
Comment from Herb
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Another good chapter. Feels like you've been posting this for a while now and things should be starting to wrap up and I've missed a few chapters on the way. Looking forward to the happy ending once she learns to love again etc ... I would make her fail and become an alcoholic and a bad mother (but I'm a sucker for realism and an optimist, LOL)

Peace Peter

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    This a romance, so you can't do that. It doesn't fit into the catagory. Thank you for the kind review. Not all abused women turn into alcoholics and bad mothers. Some make good.
reply by Herb on 15-Mar-2012
    Hmm, not in my experience. But most of those being abused were just as bad as the abusers half the time. And there was always drugs involved, but I'm from a part of the world were this was all too common. I guess when you have an escape you can, but when one is surrounded an all side by seediness
    and squalor its harder to see any light at the end of the tunnel.
reply by Herb on 15-Mar-2012
    Hmm, not in my experience. But most of those being abused were just as bad as the abusers half the time. And there was always drugs involved, but I'm from a part of the world were this was all too common. I guess when you have an escape you can, but when one is surrounded an all side by seediness
    and squalor its harder to see any light at the end of the tunnel.